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I got Pictures

A HitchHiker PoetA HitchHiker Poet Posts: 129
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I found a dusty box of pictures.
Dust so thick, black clouds covered the room.
The Blackness set the mood for what awaited me inside.
Hands trembling, I opened the old box.
Thumbing through each photogragh,
I found a picture of you.
You, so young and heavenly.
How I long for thoses days of innocence.
All I got is this picture, closing the box.
Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
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  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    Thats a very sad piece, i feel I can ralate to it, because i was looking through my mums photo album and i saw a picture of my Grandfather who died whan i was younger, and it made me wander what he would have been like to know as a person. I know the experience that you wrote about is different, but i feel that i can relate to your piece anyway-
    "...all i got is this picture, closing the box..."
    It's well written.
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
  • A HitchHiker PoetA HitchHiker Poet Posts: 129
    The poems about everything you've ever lost..For me it was special people in my life
    Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
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