Silence

A HitchHiker Poet
A HitchHiker Poet Posts: 129
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
It's golden
SSh....hear that....
It's the sound of a cool breeze.
blowing through the window

Blowing through my hair..
taking me away into the sunset
Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
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  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    So many writers are afraid to capture a moment with such graceful simplicity of image as you've produced. Thank you. :)
  • A HitchHiker Poet
    A HitchHiker Poet Posts: 129
    Thank you for your kind words
    Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
  • BlackSin
    BlackSin Posts: 83
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    So many writers are afraid to capture a moment with such graceful simplicity of image as you've produced. Thank you. :)

    I can say nothing more, but to agree with the above...

    I've always liked the short ones...

    Less is more ;)
    I can't be free with what's locked inside of me...
  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Originally posted by BlackSin


    Less is more ;)

    Only when it is. Sometimes less is less.
    .........................................................................
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by A HitchHiker Poet
    It's golden
    SSh....hear that....
    It's the sound of a cool breeze.
    blowing through the window

    Blowing through my hair..
    taking me away into the sunset

    Mmmm, I'm feeling that breeze and floating away... :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen

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