Work of Art

Morbid PoetMorbid Poet Posts: 24
edited December 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Her body is a work of art
But she had a lost soul
and a tattered heart
Her body was a work of art
but her life was uunable to start
She was beaten and thrown
and a love of pain, she had grown
Her body used to be a work of art
but her lost soul and tattered heart
had caused her so much pain inside
she couldn't run she couldn't hide
or could she?
she found a way to hide
Whenever she was down she would
make deep cuts where she thought she could hide
she hid in the cuts
and the cuts she would hide
and when the pain would grow inside
she would make deeper cuts to hide inside
until she cut too deep
and left her work of art to die
but she was saved from the pain outside
but the pain remains inside her heart
Her body is no longer a work of art :'(

I must stress the fact that this is not a lesbian poem!!!! All the other message boards seem to think it was
its a bisexual thing

I moved from the 9th to the 8th circle of hell. Before you know it I will be living in the first cirlce and I will own you.

Just say NO to Bush.

Vote Kerry! Save your freedom of speech and other various frredoms!

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Comments

  • awesome. i hope its nice and toasty there in the 9th circle of hell. come visit us up north some time.
  • eh i'll see what i can do
    its a bisexual thing

    I moved from the 9th to the 8th circle of hell. Before you know it I will be living in the first cirlce and I will own you.

    Just say NO to Bush.

    Vote Kerry! Save your freedom of speech and other various frredoms!

  • I liked the hiding in the cuts part best.
    Didn't get any lesbian connotations, though, so nothing was spoiled for me.
  • Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    I liked the hiding in the cuts part best.
    Didn't get any lesbian connotations, though, so nothing was spoiled for me.

    I agree with the cuts part.

    But I think that's because my sister was a cutter. So it hits home.
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  • Originally posted by CranMalReign
    I agree with the cuts part.

    But I think that's because my sister was a cutter. So it hits home.
    :(
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