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I Fall

YellowYellow Posts: 699
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art


Sip me down into your soul
Eat me up… and… be… whole
Sing me your lullabye
So you can… to… sleep… fall
And when you fall
Do you see All?
I fall.
I fall
I fall
I fall
Pick pockets of posies grown
By my hand… my love.. my rose
I’ll not notice I am sure
Till I, to my, sweet gardens, fall
And when I fall
Can I be all?
I fall.
I fall
I fall
I fall
~*~*~
So. Sip me down into your soul.
Drink me up. Here, hear your pillow toll.
I am but one little piece
And Peace from up above should Fall.
And now I fall
So is that all?
I fall.
I fall
I fall
I fall
It's all yellow.


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  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    We all need to fall into that place, that empty place that is somehow filled with all the answers in its silence

    Looks like a good song
  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Originally posted by EvilToasterElf
    Looks like a good song

    Agreed. I'd really like to hear you sing this... or just recite it in your voice.

    It would do more justice to it than my mental fumblings.
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I'll catch you! :)

    Love it, Yellow!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    After reading this, do you guys think it should be a fast angsty type o' melody or a somber, reflective sort? I see (or I guess "hear" would be more apropo) a combo, especially with the
    "I fall.
    I fall
    I fall
    I fall"
    part, I harken back to Ed's song about Layne:
    "No blame.
    No blame.
    No blame
    It could be you."

    Then again, I think in Pearl Jam.
    Then again part 2, it's Yella's song, and CNN has documented proof that Yellow kicks ass, so her song will, too :D
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    this is a slow little skippy tune
    lots of loud vocals
    not crass
    just
    not whispery...

    :)
    It's all yellow.


  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    'sip me down into your soul'

    wow


    i fall i fall i fall



    ~~considered yrself Sipped~~

    so in there

    IN


    WOW

    i fall
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    hey! that tickles!

    :D:D:D:D
    It's all yellow.


  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    slurp me down into yr soul...

    next time i'll have
    to use
    a straw

    :)
    :)
    :)
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