two suns

Yellow

in this world
on this Earth
there are two suns
setting simultaneously
on opposite ends of America

and i held hands with each
attemtping, I ran
toward each beach

and was left
armless
where I began

EvilToasterElf

Wow, what a clever little poem, I had to read it a couple times to figure out what was going on, but those little moments of clarity we manage to jot down sometimes are the most satisfying

Yellow

i like how it reads really slowly


our first drafts were always made to be cut in half

EvilToasterElf

yeah I know the feeling