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god, it's cold in here...

YellowYellow Posts: 699
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
fierce ice ire
untapped love
there is no love
and never was

no threads to grab
no fabric bound
only you
mud paw hound

two sheets hung
up side by side
hems beat down
each other's breeze

impinge upon
the inbetween
your fingers pro'd
the ugly thing

call me loose
i float away...



i float away
now light down on
this icy pond
and cold i lay

so cold i lay
and lie in wait
sweet fishes come
and test the bait
i lay so coldly out
hold, ho, man, you
hold
and be true

hold and be true

take me now
and half will lie
with catfishes
and forever
It's all yellow.


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  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    wow.

    you know the first fish I ever caught in the wild was a catfish...

    a forever remembrance, I suppose.

    a drowning of love, a cleansing of love, a dispersal of love, a lead on the manner with which we love, and then wither.

    yellow, words woven as a bracelet, anklet and handcuff. Tight, tighter, unable to let go.

    let us not rust though we oxidize. let us present ourselves with CLR.

    wow.

    seta
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Cool Yellow!!

    You know what?

    There's nothing like the thrill of catching a a 75lb catfish with your bare hands in a muddy creek in Okie BasGookey folkies do it all the time.

    mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm CATFISH....good eatin.
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    To echo seta, yes, wow! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    let us not rust as we oxidize
    perhaps a patina would be better?



    morning all :)
    It's all yellow.


  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Morning! How are ya?
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Good morning dear friends........

    i brought catfish coffee cake..any takers?
  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    I feel muddy now.
    and yet.......
    purified

    and yet.....
    yellowish
    which looks like a
    yellow wish

    my wish for yellow is:
    empty your pm box, babe;)
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    Originally posted by Yellow
    let us not rust as we oxidize
    perhaps a patina would be better?



    morning all :)



    just bronze me. Forget the shine that will fade and wear away, do it for the life of the mantle that I'll be put upon to be revered and yet forgotten all at the same time.

    God, it's cold in here.

    Did I mention my heater's out? As in out, dating other heaters. He hasn't come back yet. Stupid, selfish, stuck up PRIG.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    bronze my copper heart






    i set to clean out da box...
    It's all yellow.


  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Originally posted by Yellow
    i set to clean out da box...
    Perhaps I could lend an appendage?
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    she don't need no squid ya mug.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    Originally posted by setaside2
    she don't need no squid ya mug.

    not unless it's breaded and deep fried...

    hold the mercury, please :)
    It's all yellow.


  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Hmmmmmmm
    Never had squid before.....

    I have had eight Jamaican belly dancers at once, so you could say I've had, ahem, octopussy.

    :D
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Hmmmmmmm
    Never had squid before.....

    I have had eight Jamaican belly dancers at once, so you could say I've had, ahem, octopussy.

    :D

    slime.
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    That was my first response, too, B.Gita.
    Oh, I'll change the subject.....

    Thanks for your poem, Yellow. Sometimes getting these words out from bitter experience is like tearing through rock for a diamond....you've got to work so carefully that it's all the more agonising. But it was worth it. Sorry if that analogy was a bit corny. You know what I mean. Thank you.
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    carrots, were you in my brain last night???
    that *thing* up there started out as

    "i took a dive today"...


    time to emancipate
    i guess it was the beatings....



    yeah, yeah... tearing through a rock... i totally know what you're saying



    oh, and Radar??? you so wish, yellow wish fish... you wish...
    hey na mon, pass 'em dat sweet splif afor i haf ta go and get 'em da switch... dis skinny lil white boy canna handle de smoke :P
    It's all yellow.


  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Originally posted by Yellow
    dis skinny lil white boy canna handle de smoke :P
    If the doobie is rockin
    don't bother knockin

    skinny?
    skin
    ny
    ?

    now you know ;)
  • phishgodphishgod Posts: 133
    Now would that catfish coffee be with chicory, the boy wonders,
    and phishgod smiled, said, rise fishes, mumbled sacred words and phrases, and the lakers rise perfectly sleek like practically jumping in the boat to watch us catch 'em as koi,
    and hence phishgod was born,
    not made.

    good read
    rockon,
    phishgod
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    haluna nakai lena makai hoi


    poi boy




    :)



    thanks
    It's all yellow.


  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    to think that we hide breakfast club references in this thread and it lives on and on...

    wondrous.

    a minor reference to be sure but hey.

    night all...

    and yellow: we speak soon.... :D
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    Originally posted by setaside2
    to think that we hide breakfast club references in this thread and it lives on and on...


    oh gosh, you caught that?!? *i love that movie* lol :D
    It's all yellow.


  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    my dear off colored orange....

    of COURSE I caught that.

    hence the siting of said reference LOL. De chicks, dey can't hold de smoke.

    and the skinny white boy? damn but if it ain't anthony michael hall.

    poor guy played the geek and the dork his whole life. don't I know it.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    off colored orange, huh?

    :P
    It's all yellow.


  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by Yellow
    carrots, were you in my brain last night???


    Some peeplez well dey sayz i is astral.

    Actually, I had one of dem odd, uncanny experiences at the Neil Young/ PJ Finsbury Park gig in 93 (the gig with the carrots). I was at the front of the stage, near enough...and de lil' Vedderman he was singin' "Once". He catch me eye, at de end, he shout "Onccccccccccce!" an I look back wid de crazy eyeballs an I says "Onccccccccccce!" back. So we both be lookin at each other goin' crazy an' sayin' "Onccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccce!"
    An' I hear it on a boot I got now, an' I say to myself, we two crazy fukkas meetin' in de brain at dat moment in history. We did de fleeting bond thingy. But den later on he throw dese carrots out to the crowd an one hit me on de fukkin nose.
    It was all orange.
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    orange is my favorite color :)
    It's all yellow.


  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Originally posted by Yellow
    orange is my favorite color :)
    Ironic
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    don't cha think?
    It's all yellow.


  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084


    I said...........





    Off Color Le Orange




    deal with it. :p

    :D

    and fins... awesome awesome connection.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084


    YELLOW

    CHECK your mail not your male check your mail.

    you can DO IT.



    bad rhythm dayyyyyy
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
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