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YellowYellow Posts: 699
edited May 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Are we ready, Love?
To step outside ourselves again?

The lifting up…
The forgiveness…
the Triple A clean clean sweep
that the best band-aid in the world can’t compete with.
The healed don’t kiss the doctor
The soccer kids don’t stay side-lined
They go back to play or on about their way
And the saints have shiny wings and broken hearts to show the Lord.
Hushing squeaky greaseless wheels.
It's all yellow.


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  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    beautiful Yellow....
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    many thanks nailz :D
    It's all yellow.


  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    who could resist a propossal so pure and true?

    i know i'm ready, how about you? :)
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    in love, outside ourselves may be the best place to be...
    unless you're in bed, of course
    there
    it's good to be present, yes?


    ;)
    It's all yellow.


  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    with the right somebody, yes indeedy! :D

    i said that out loud right? *blushes*
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    Was somebody talking about me......haha (just kidding)
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    t'were they not right...
    perhaps they should be on zee couch? :)


    yes


    i sink so



    :D
    It's all yellow.


  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    oh you are the wise one :D

    next time i have one on the couch (which will undoubtedly be a LOOOOOOOONG time from now) - mind if i confer with you so you can help me figure out if the next move should be to the doorstep or upstairs?
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    most absolutely miss coleen :)

    i'll have to give you my number for emergency's sake :P


    :D
    It's all yellow.


  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    That last line makes it

    When I sit down to write a lot of my poems I start with what I think is a really good image but what ends up happening more often then not is the poem doesn't come out until half a page later, I think you had one of those moments, I think you should run off of that last line and see where it takes you and you might end up throwing the rest out
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    :o

    that'd be like throwing out a fuzzy pic of my kids!!!

    just can't do it!



    (j/k ~ thanks eviltoes)
    It's all yellow.


  • PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    Hey Yellow! Havent seen ya in a while. How are ya?

    What a beautiful read for a beautiful morning.

    Thanks for your words.
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
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