yellow fish

Yellow
Yellow Posts: 699
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
yellow-gilled fishes fly
home friday nights
full of wishes for
everything, everything right

these yellow fishes
can't seem to remember
that their dirty fins
are what brought them this plight

dirty fins mucking up caller id's
dirty mouths sucking down what's left of me
they can't see or they wont bring themselves to believe
that my little green skiff's left their great big blue sea

fuck little gilled fishes
let them lie in the mud
let their jaws work for blood
let them worry my love

and when high tide comes?
they'll go back to their seas
and i'll comfort my love
and she will comfort me
It's all yellow.


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  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    This sounds like you're angry.
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  • Yellow
    Yellow Posts: 699
    good :D



    it should
    It's all yellow.


  • rise above
    rise above Posts: 71
    this yellow gilled fish...he can also be called yellow bellied, can't he... :/

    i know a fisherman, i wonder if he can do his thing and set this fish straight. you ever get stuck with a fish hook? ouch, i imagine.
    "Life is a wonderful thing - don't let anyone keep you from enjoying it."
    ---PureandEasy

    *****

    "A little voice Inside my head said, "Don't look back. You can never look back." --Don Henley

    *****
    ...thank you for a funk-ay time...

    *****

    "there i go, turn the page..."
    --Bob Segar & Metallica

    "You’re a butterfly
    And butterflies are free to fly" - EJ



  • JDE-PJ
    JDE-PJ Posts: 721
    nice yellow!
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason
  • Yellow
    Yellow Posts: 699
    Originally posted by rise above
    this yellow gilled fish...he can also be called yellow bellied, can't he... :/

    i know a fisherman, i wonder if he can do his thing and set this fish straight. you ever get stuck with a fish hook? ouch, i imagine.

    yella bellied sump suckka's


    and yeah.. i have... in the face, so...


    :) thanks for stopping by :D
    It's all yellow.


  • rise above
    rise above Posts: 71
    Originally posted by Yellow
    yella bellied sump suckka's


    and yeah.. i have... in the face, so...


    :) thanks for stopping by :D

    ouch again, in the face? geeez.

    so....you ok?
    "Life is a wonderful thing - don't let anyone keep you from enjoying it."
    ---PureandEasy

    *****

    "A little voice Inside my head said, "Don't look back. You can never look back." --Don Henley

    *****
    ...thank you for a funk-ay time...

    *****

    "there i go, turn the page..."
    --Bob Segar & Metallica

    "You’re a butterfly
    And butterflies are free to fly" - EJ



  • carpenter_newton
    carpenter_newton Posts: 71
    Originally posted by rise above
    i know a fisherman, i wonder if he can do his thing and set this fish straight. you ever get stuck with a fish hook? ouch, i imagine.


    try getting three hooks in the back of your head at once. and do it when you're wearing a hat, so that the hooks literally fix said hat to your scalp.

    as far as the figurative fish go, i'm not too sure what to do about them.
    i suggest you step out on your porch
    run away my son...see it all...oh see the world
  • john girl
    john girl Posts: 308
    Deep,
    go deep,


    Asian Yellow

    or the cowardly kind

    I am hooked.
  • Yellow
    Yellow Posts: 699
    Originally posted by rise above
    so....you ok?



    just a little prick

    er... ah... dick...



    oops! i mean STICK... yes yes.. STICK

    it was years ago... no worries :D
    It's all yellow.


  • Yellow
    Yellow Posts: 699
    Originally posted by john girl
    Deep,
    go deep,


    Asian Yellow

    or the cowardly kind

    I am hooked.


    chartreucious say...

    speak loudly... carry little stick :)
    It's all yellow.


  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by Yellow
    chartreucious say...

    speak loudly... carry little stick :)


    A toohpick? ;):D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Yellow
    Yellow Posts: 699
    not that little...


    well


    actually...

    yes...


    maybe even smaller... like a splinter or sompin :)
    It's all yellow.


  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by Yellow
    not that little...


    well


    actually...

    yes...


    maybe even smaller... like a splinter or sompin :)

    Heck! You'd barely feel the little, teeny prick then! :D

    Some fishies just have a bigger bark.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Yellow
    Yellow Posts: 699
    not if it's jabbed under a fingernail!
    It's all yellow.


  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by Yellow
    not if it's jabbed under a fingernail!

    OUCH! Dats torture!

    This reminds me of a weird story about this weird kid I used to play with sometimes as a kid. Well, one day this other kid says to the weird kid "Hey, I dare you to shove this stick in your butt." Well, hell, if she didn't do it and then prance around wiggling her ass until her mother caught her, told her to yank the stick outta her ass and dragged her home by the arm.

    I certainly would not like a splinter in my bum. I wonder if she got one that day? I never asked.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    OUCH! Dats torture!

    This reminds me of a weird story about this weird kid I used to play with sometimes as a kid. Well, one day this other kid says to the weird kid "Hey, I dare you to shove this stick in your butt." Well, hell, if she didn't do it and then prance around wiggling her ass until her mother caught her, told her to yank the stick outta her ass and dragged her home by the arm.

    I certainly would not like a splinter in my bum. I wonder if she got one that day? I never asked.


    :D

    Couldn't help but notice that the stick-up-the-ass story was followed by the sig "All poets bleed"!

    Anyway.....
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    :D

    Couldn't help but notice that the stick-up-the-ass story was followed by the sig "All poets bleed"!

    Anyway.....

    LMFAO! :D

    Good one!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Yellow
    Yellow Posts: 699
    hahahaa...

    "i dare you to shove this stick up your ass"...



    omg... :D
    It's all yellow.


  • Yellow
    Yellow Posts: 699
    sorry...

    i misquoted the kid who told the weird kid that...

    but still :D omg...
    It's all yellow.


  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Yeah, it was a classic Kodak moment! :D:D

    Clickity-click-shove-up-dee-stick! ;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen

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