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yellow fish

YellowYellow Posts: 699
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
yellow-gilled fishes fly
home friday nights
full of wishes for
everything, everything right

these yellow fishes
can't seem to remember
that their dirty fins
are what brought them this plight

dirty fins mucking up caller id's
dirty mouths sucking down what's left of me
they can't see or they wont bring themselves to believe
that my little green skiff's left their great big blue sea

fuck little gilled fishes
let them lie in the mud
let their jaws work for blood
let them worry my love

and when high tide comes?
they'll go back to their seas
and i'll comfort my love
and she will comfort me
It's all yellow.


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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    This sounds like you're angry.
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  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    good :D



    it should
    It's all yellow.


  • rise aboverise above Posts: 71
    this yellow gilled fish...he can also be called yellow bellied, can't he... :/

    i know a fisherman, i wonder if he can do his thing and set this fish straight. you ever get stuck with a fish hook? ouch, i imagine.
    "Life is a wonderful thing - don't let anyone keep you from enjoying it."
    ---PureandEasy

    *****

    "A little voice Inside my head said, "Don't look back. You can never look back." --Don Henley

    *****
    ...thank you for a funk-ay time...

    *****

    "there i go, turn the page..."
    --Bob Segar & Metallica

    "You’re a butterfly
    And butterflies are free to fly" - EJ



  • JDE-PJJDE-PJ Posts: 721
    nice yellow!
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    Originally posted by rise above
    this yellow gilled fish...he can also be called yellow bellied, can't he... :/

    i know a fisherman, i wonder if he can do his thing and set this fish straight. you ever get stuck with a fish hook? ouch, i imagine.

    yella bellied sump suckka's


    and yeah.. i have... in the face, so...


    :) thanks for stopping by :D
    It's all yellow.


  • rise aboverise above Posts: 71
    Originally posted by Yellow
    yella bellied sump suckka's


    and yeah.. i have... in the face, so...


    :) thanks for stopping by :D

    ouch again, in the face? geeez.

    so....you ok?
    "Life is a wonderful thing - don't let anyone keep you from enjoying it."
    ---PureandEasy

    *****

    "A little voice Inside my head said, "Don't look back. You can never look back." --Don Henley

    *****
    ...thank you for a funk-ay time...

    *****

    "there i go, turn the page..."
    --Bob Segar & Metallica

    "You’re a butterfly
    And butterflies are free to fly" - EJ



  • carpenter_newtoncarpenter_newton Posts: 71
    Originally posted by rise above
    i know a fisherman, i wonder if he can do his thing and set this fish straight. you ever get stuck with a fish hook? ouch, i imagine.


    try getting three hooks in the back of your head at once. and do it when you're wearing a hat, so that the hooks literally fix said hat to your scalp.

    as far as the figurative fish go, i'm not too sure what to do about them.
    i suggest you step out on your porch
    run away my son...see it all...oh see the world
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    Deep,
    go deep,


    Asian Yellow

    or the cowardly kind

    I am hooked.
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    Originally posted by rise above
    so....you ok?



    just a little prick

    er... ah... dick...



    oops! i mean STICK... yes yes.. STICK

    it was years ago... no worries :D
    It's all yellow.


  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    Originally posted by john girl
    Deep,
    go deep,


    Asian Yellow

    or the cowardly kind

    I am hooked.


    chartreucious say...

    speak loudly... carry little stick :)
    It's all yellow.


  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by Yellow
    chartreucious say...

    speak loudly... carry little stick :)


    A toohpick? ;):D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    not that little...


    well


    actually...

    yes...


    maybe even smaller... like a splinter or sompin :)
    It's all yellow.


  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by Yellow
    not that little...


    well


    actually...

    yes...


    maybe even smaller... like a splinter or sompin :)

    Heck! You'd barely feel the little, teeny prick then! :D

    Some fishies just have a bigger bark.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    not if it's jabbed under a fingernail!
    It's all yellow.


  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by Yellow
    not if it's jabbed under a fingernail!

    OUCH! Dats torture!

    This reminds me of a weird story about this weird kid I used to play with sometimes as a kid. Well, one day this other kid says to the weird kid "Hey, I dare you to shove this stick in your butt." Well, hell, if she didn't do it and then prance around wiggling her ass until her mother caught her, told her to yank the stick outta her ass and dragged her home by the arm.

    I certainly would not like a splinter in my bum. I wonder if she got one that day? I never asked.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    OUCH! Dats torture!

    This reminds me of a weird story about this weird kid I used to play with sometimes as a kid. Well, one day this other kid says to the weird kid "Hey, I dare you to shove this stick in your butt." Well, hell, if she didn't do it and then prance around wiggling her ass until her mother caught her, told her to yank the stick outta her ass and dragged her home by the arm.

    I certainly would not like a splinter in my bum. I wonder if she got one that day? I never asked.


    :D

    Couldn't help but notice that the stick-up-the-ass story was followed by the sig "All poets bleed"!

    Anyway.....
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    :D

    Couldn't help but notice that the stick-up-the-ass story was followed by the sig "All poets bleed"!

    Anyway.....

    LMFAO! :D

    Good one!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    hahahaa...

    "i dare you to shove this stick up your ass"...



    omg... :D
    It's all yellow.


  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    sorry...

    i misquoted the kid who told the weird kid that...

    but still :D omg...
    It's all yellow.


  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Yeah, it was a classic Kodak moment! :D:D

    Clickity-click-shove-up-dee-stick! ;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Hee Hee! Some of the oldies are gems!

    Fry them fucking fishes!!!! ;)



    Heh, heh--the stick up the ass story still makes me larf like a loon!!! :D
    I wonder what she's up to these days? :p

    I bellow,
    "Hello, Yellow!!!!"
    She answers,
    "I'm still the same but much more mellow" :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    never read this one the first time around. wtf it was 2 years ago!!

    much more humorous than the stupid jokes i posted on aet today!!
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    this thing is filled with laughs..
    there's tons of these threads in the archives, too, GAWD


    yellow was my best username, ever ~ (kurt cobained called me "yellow" in a dream the night before i signed it up. he was so so so so sweet and gentle :))



    *sigh*


    thanks palli alli
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    PastaNazi wrote:
    this thing is filled with laughs..
    there's tons of these threads in the archives, too, GAWD


    yellow was my best username, ever ~ (kurt cobained called me "yellow" in a dream the night before i signed it up. he was so so so so sweet and gentle :))



    *sigh*


    thanks palli alli

    :) Yeah, olderman, we hads us some good laughs! More laughs than I guess we should have but man, it was all in good fun, right Pasta? :)

    I liked Yellow the best too. It's so bright and sunny and whenever I'd hear someone say the word, I'd think of you. :) Now you're a noodle and also, you're welcome, darlin'! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    PastaNazi wrote:
    this thing is filled with laughs..
    there's tons of these threads in the archives, too, GAWD


    yellow was my best username, ever ~ (kurt cobained called me "yellow" in a dream the night before i signed it up. he was so so so so sweet and gentle :))



    *sigh*


    thanks palli alli

    i remember now that you once used the yellow username. sheez it's been awhile.

    "i'm just mad about saffron.."

    it's oldies and goodies day here at the big sound of PJFX FM in the heart of the PPMA Forum..

    much love!!
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    PastaNazi wrote:
    this thing is filled with laughs..
    there's tons of these threads in the archives, too, GAWD


    yellow was my best username, ever ~ (kurt cobained called me "yellow" in a dream the night before i signed it up. he was so so so so sweet and gentle :))



    *sigh*


    thanks palli alli

    i remember now that you once used the yellow username. sheez it's been awhile.

    "i'm just mad about saffron.."

    it's oldies and goodies day here at the big sound of PJFX FM in the heart of the PPMA Forum..

    much love!!
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    double postin' no good sum sun beaches :D
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    "she's just mad about me"


    quite rightly...

    or is that quiet riot lee?

    I suppose it's either, given the accent in which you speak.


    :) Love you, Olderman
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