Done Dying...

YellowYellow Posts: 699
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
It doesnt' matter to me
the salt wont part from the sea
you were a wonder to me
and baby, i almost died trying

mister fortunate son
go on now, cry for your gun
and the six silver bullets that
i will not see fly

Now see here, fortunate me,
i'm free and I am flying....

You always questioned my birth
my girth, my depth, my heft, my
left hand loves the emptiness

My first real fear in thirteen years
has me out drinking beer with a queer
and baby that's fine

Cuz I'll drink beer with a queer
before I find myself lying...

*~*~*~*


It doesnt' matter to me
the salt wont part from the sea
you were a wonder to me
and baby, i almost died

If you took one little stand
been a man, took my hand
understand? been a man
I would not be standing here whining

I'll take this life on my terms
fuck the worms
I am done dying

I'll take this life on my terms
fuck the worms
I am done dying
It's all yellow.


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Comments

  • JDE-PJJDE-PJ Posts: 721
    I like it Yellow:)
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    thanks j
    It's all yellow.


  • Sorry yellow, All I could think about was how much I love fortunate son - but I'm willing to bet it's pretty damn good
  • Nice. :)
  • mill about in the putrid decay
    of all those things dead yesterday
    so your bullets hit me
    so your bullets killed some of me
    so you leave feeling satisfied
    so you leave and some things die
    But from that death comes new life
    So fly
    And fly
    And fly

    Fuck the worms, it's no time to die!





    I shout out a hello, Yellow!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    right back at cha baby doll


    i mustn't play today

    work
    work
    work :)



    later, yo?
    It's all yellow.


  • Originally posted by Yellow
    right back at cha baby doll


    i mustn't play today

    work
    work
    work :)



    later, yo?

    Yo! Later. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    I like this one. :)
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  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    thank you! it's a nice little song to sing
    can really get the emotion flowing with the vocals

    :)
    It's all yellow.


  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Have to hear ya sing it, yella! :)
  • Hey, Ol' Yella :p

    The last refrain is killa.

    Insane in the refrain.....
    Insane in the refrain.....
    Insane, got no brain.....
    Insane in the refrain.....

    Word.
    :D
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    ha! w-w-w-w-werd, yo! :)



    my intent is to get some kinda device that'll allow me to record these as mp3's so's i can share 'em that way :)
    It's all yellow.


  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    You should invest in a four-track and rig it up to the pc! :)
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    there's gotta be some radio shack spawn out there that'll do



    :D
    It's all yellow.


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