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lolly gag

YellowYellow Posts: 699
edited May 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
set sleeps
chaos rested
night goes by and by
and i
oh i
love love love
the way this feels
'tis but perfect
save you pressing me
for details re:
my third hand

hah, and she?
she???

she would make you one
as you discovered
ah.....
yes....
there
it
is





oh but the wine
it's in my cheek
and i
oh i

think you're fine
It's all yellow.


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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    as fine as a poem from YELLOW. :)
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    thanks babe :)

    how are you today?
    It's all yellow.


  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    like your poems yellow.. how about treating all of us to a sonnet in the challenge thread? :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    right as rain. :D
    after last week things can only get better (thats what they tell me anyway). got a great big ole hug from the universe last night and its more than i could have hoped for.

    how about you? are things okay with you?
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    Originally posted by olderman
    like your poems yellow.. how about treating all of us to a sonnet in the challenge thread? :)

    teeHEE...

    i remember telling someone i could compose a sonnet about their *edit*... :):):)

    perhaps i should try?


    thanks, olderman
    It's all yellow.


  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    and coleen?


    yeah... MOST things are right with me this morning, 'cept that i miss my baby...



    a universal hug, eh? how sweet is that?
    It's all yellow.


  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    i'm glad things are well, i was thinking about you bunches yesterday and sending all my positive thoughts your way. ;)

    missin em like crazy i bet, i know thats how i'd feel but i'm sure that you're baby is missing you too.

    hugs from the universe are almost as good as hugs from the one you love best. :D
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    allllllllmost....


    kinda funny, but yeah...

    i could use a weeklong squeeze about now :)
    It's all yellow.


  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Red, cherry Jolly Rancher lolly

    Me

    Me sucking on red, cherry Jolly Rancher lolly

    Lolly goes a little too far down the throat

    Therefore, lolly gag.


    ;):D:D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    ;)


    :D:D
    It's all yellow.


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