...more crap...

20_layne_xien20_layne_xien Posts: 57
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
here goes...

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i jump off a bridge
does anyone follow
does anyone know
does anyone care

if i were to fall 20 stories through life
would anyone see me
would anyone remember
would anyone be sad when i hit rock bottom

off a cliff i fly
does anyone see my flying
does anyone watch me fall
does anyone see me crash and burn

into a hole i crumble
six feet to my grave
is anyone there to mourn
mourn what? there is no tragedy
just me
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i look out over a sea of gray
this field of hay
what can i say, what can i do
to repay you

the field of mine
reaches the trees so high
they reach the sky
and try to pull it down

rain is falling as if to say
hey, i'm still here
don't go away
and don't forget me just yet
i ain't gone yet

cut me down
from this tree i hang
the only way
my only escape
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~ 20 layne
...time is never wasted when you're wasted all the time...

"breathe, breathe in the air...don't be afraid to care...leave but don't leave me...look around and choose your own ground...for long you live and high you fly...and smiles you'll give and tears you'll cry...and all you touch and all you see...is all your life will ever be..."
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Comments

  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    i loved it
    has a nice rythme
    ......


    keep on rockin...
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    the field of mine
    reaches the trees so high
    they reach the sky
    and try to pull it down

    rain is falling as if to say
    hey, i'm still here
    don't go away
    and don't forget me just yet
    i ain't gone yet



    beautiful!
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • thanx guys...
    ...time is never wasted when you're wasted all the time...

    "breathe, breathe in the air...don't be afraid to care...leave but don't leave me...look around and choose your own ground...for long you live and high you fly...and smiles you'll give and tears you'll cry...and all you touch and all you see...is all your life will ever be..."
  • Just you?

    Well then, let me get out my saw and cut you down. :)

    Not crap!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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