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20_layne_xien20_layne_xien Posts: 57
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
take this needle
shoot me up
some memories
i'll soon forget

take tis hammer
pound me into
the shape you
want me to be

take these sissors
cut the perfect
outline you
expect to see

take these stones
and throw them
at your only
worst enemy

take these eyes
and stare them down
stare me down
but that's not enough

take this tree
and plant it right
on top of me
my little tomb of roots i see

take this car and
drive it off a cliff
to see me
fade away

take this rope
and hang yourself
you see it happen
every day

take these leaves
and burn them all
inhailing smoke
might make you live

swallow all your
hate for me
it forms a lump
inside your throught

swimming in your misery
you'll soon find out
you're gonna
drown

taking everything away
soon enough
it will all
bring you down
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amputate ny soul
so there is room to grow
i don't need one anyway
steal my bleeding heart
it's not so important
i'll never love again anyway
run away with my smile
the last one i had
i don't need to be happy

i give 100% and i get zero back
'cause i fell into my trap
i set when i started this suicide mission
there is no way out

something on my shoulder
taking me down
something on my back
pulling me down

put me down i have no need to live
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~20
...time is never wasted when you're wasted all the time...

"breathe, breathe in the air...don't be afraid to care...leave but don't leave me...look around and choose your own ground...for long you live and high you fly...and smiles you'll give and tears you'll cry...and all you touch and all you see...is all your life will ever be..."
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  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    hoo boy... yeah... i um... yeah...

    let them take your smile
    you'll find a new one
    of your own choosing
    It's all yellow.


  • 20_layne_xien20_layne_xien Posts: 57
    Originally posted by Yellow
    hoo boy... yeah... i um... yeah...

    let them take your smile
    you'll find a new one
    of your own choosing

    ......
    ...time is never wasted when you're wasted all the time...

    "breathe, breathe in the air...don't be afraid to care...leave but don't leave me...look around and choose your own ground...for long you live and high you fly...and smiles you'll give and tears you'll cry...and all you touch and all you see...is all your life will ever be..."
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    wow. you remind me of a AIC song.
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
  • 20_layne_xien20_layne_xien Posts: 57
    Originally posted by sevensins
    wow. you remind me of a AIC song.

    which one?
    ...time is never wasted when you're wasted all the time...

    "breathe, breathe in the air...don't be afraid to care...leave but don't leave me...look around and choose your own ground...for long you live and high you fly...and smiles you'll give and tears you'll cry...and all you touch and all you see...is all your life will ever be..."
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    does it matter? its no song in piticular....it's just got the same feeling.......your names also layne so theres that to
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
  • August stormAugust storm Posts: 186
    wow that was emotional, who ever hurt you , really hurt you, im sorry. but great poem i felt the pain!
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    After reading these and what I read on the "moving train" you need to reevaluate your young life. Cutting yourself for reasons that you don't even know is just sad. There is help available.
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • 20_layne_xien20_layne_xien Posts: 57
    Originally posted by sevensins
    ...your names also layne so theres that to

    coincedence? i think not. (i can't spell)
    ...time is never wasted when you're wasted all the time...

    "breathe, breathe in the air...don't be afraid to care...leave but don't leave me...look around and choose your own ground...for long you live and high you fly...and smiles you'll give and tears you'll cry...and all you touch and all you see...is all your life will ever be..."
  • 20_layne_xien20_layne_xien Posts: 57
    Originally posted by even flow?
    ...for reasons that you don't even know is just sad...

    who says it's for no reason... there may not be logical reason, but there is definately reason as there is for everything i do...
    ...time is never wasted when you're wasted all the time...

    "breathe, breathe in the air...don't be afraid to care...leave but don't leave me...look around and choose your own ground...for long you live and high you fly...and smiles you'll give and tears you'll cry...and all you touch and all you see...is all your life will ever be..."
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