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derekgattoderekgatto Posts: 44
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
At the forum, in our minds,
the doctor is in.
He prescibed me some dopamines,
but would'nt tell me his name.

I know it is, because
God told me so, with
the smell of alien skin,
and my talks with the dead.

She ate my mushroom,
and it felt so real.
I became you through meta-physics.
I became the fortune of the wheel.

The men in black,
sold me some land, in my mind.
I thought I was in Heaven.
I have been through Hell.

Excuse me, there is a knock at the door.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Can i even think....?Awesome..Read TenaciousA
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Thank you, i will take your advice, Ali. You can find me at poetry.com, if you choose, and yes it is very hard to think, with all the food court chatter, in this wedding mingle.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Thanks for the info...i briefly checked it out....I don't know if it's for me...writing a play....singing....call me Allison...
    Didn't someone once say art is life..life is art..or something like that?
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Originally posted by derekgatto
    At the forum, in our minds,
    the doctor is in.
    He prescibed me some dopamines,
    but would'nt tell me his name.

    I know it is, because
    God told me so, with
    the smell of alien skin,
    and my talks with the dead.

    She ate my mushroom,
    and it felt so real.
    I became you through meta-physics.
    I became the fortune of the wheel.

    The men in black
    sold me some land, in my mind.
    I thought I was in Heaven.
    I have been through Hell.

    Excuse me, there is a knock at the door.

    personal question?

    does your implanet i mean implant go off in dark movie theaters?
  • (this message will self destruct in ten seconds....)
    i can hear a strange buzzing coming from my girlfriend?
  • get back































































































































































































































































































































































































































































    Boom
  • nice poem...very cool
    "Trying to be a person you're not is a waste of the person you really are."- Kurt D. Cobain (R.I.P February 20, 1967- April 5, 1994, we love u Kurt)



  • I came back from the void.
    put back together by god.
    she does'nt buzz anymore.
    what do you think?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    She must be alive...somewhere out there....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Is that what you're thinking?
    Oh.. to be inside the mind of a man...
    just for one day....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • The question is who is knocking at your door?
  • Originally posted by derekgatto
    The question is who is knocking at your door?

    they don't knock because i have a buzzer.
  • Now that half the page is gone, I guess we can talk!
  • Bhagavadgita,
    this one is for you.
    I do'nt know if it is your job,
    or if you have taken a keen interest
    in my work, but
    I applaud you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    p.s. I wish someone would put together
    the greatest of our works.
    (In this p.j. collect, I only submit my newest works.)
  • The internet in our mind.
    god, satan, ghosts, aliens,
    humans, tech.
    (you be the judge?)
    p.s. i love you too.........
    In my mind, we are already at everest, with bjork.
  • hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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