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My immature immortality

derekgattoderekgatto Posts: 44
edited December 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Alone in my bed, masterbating,
with an angel in my head, and
her screams inside my ears!
(Easing my fears...)

I am shamefully under covers,
with an eye on the door, and
my finger upon the trigger...
(Building my nerve, greater.)

They are around my bedside,
with unfamiliar faces, and floating heads.
I can hear them snickering. "Grandma?"
"Do I make you proud?" I said.

On the television, on every channel,
as I change, is a Japanese girl...
Blowing me kisses!!!
For the pennies, that i've been wishing.
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Comments

  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I just could never think of Grandma if I was masturbating! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    you are the best b.e.
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • SleightOfHand562SleightOfHand562 Posts: 477
    Originally posted by Sound
    you are the best b.e.

    concur!
    There have been shows where maybe the whole first half of the show my eyes have been closed. and then you'll look out in the crowd and there'll be somebody totally lost in their head, in exactly the same place you're in. That, to me, is the essence of music

    ~Jeff Ament
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Shit, I just looked at this again to see what was up and if I didn't blush. I appreciate it but I'm certainly not the best. Thanks though! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • seekitseekit Posts: 73
    Tears in blue ignore how they go
    *
    down my cheek, you only see my breakthrough

    Don’t try to own what isn’t yours
    *
    Respect my brokenness put down the bandage these
    are my sores
    *
    My lack of words work for me – I will feel through this misery.


    I’m alright
    it just tonight
    Seek It
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