First posted poem - Tell me what you think :)

chompchomp Posts: 2
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
This one was written bout 4/5 years ago, i dont usually show these to many people so this is rarity! Your thoughts on the poem would be nice thanx :)

Wicked Games

And forever they are yours,
Or just the figures behind closed doors,
Just a moment of despair, that hung beyond your every care,
That screamed and wailed at mesh so torn and clung but failed to reach the dawn,
That churned your body with milk so pure, from your breast I cling no more.
Yet with this thought I’ll start again.
With my pride I will begin,
To make more sense of what is here and use my strength to keep you near.
Though it still lingers inside my veins and flows past where the truth remains,
Time shall pass and it will drain, through my heart, towards my brain,
Shadows will lift and memories once tamed,
Will rage at the thought of your Wicked Games.
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  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
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