An old poem i wrote

AlterEgoAlterEgo Posts: 89
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
This was something i wrote maybe two years ago (during half an hour when i was supposed to be paying attentiton in class ;)) in response to September 11 and everything that followed. Basically an anti-war poem.

"Our war on terror begins with al Qaeda, but it does not end there." - George W. Bush

Agent Orange Kent State
Cold War stalemate
Israel Palestine
watch out a land mine
Catholic Protestant
firebomb in a tenement
poison gas trench barricades
caught up in the Palmer raids
Gettysburg Shiloh
dead men in a row
Khruschev JFK
might have blown the world away
Bloody Sunday Black September
I'm too young to remember
Guess what? It's still going
bombs bursting blood flowing
ashes cover people scared
hoping that they will be spared
children cry parents dead
all the world gray and red
everyone cloaed in fear
What's going to happen here?
Do I mean here or there?
I don't now I don't care
silent screams cities burn
Won't the world ever learn?

It makes me think
of a bumper sticker I saw
on a car on Bardstown Road
"War doesn't prove who's right
only who's left."
"Dude...it's a hamburger on top of a rocket ship!"
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  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    And on the eleventh day of September, 2001, the world turned upside down.

    The giant of the world, America, was smitten by those who suffer most from its intrusions.

    Suddenly, the streets of the land of the free were filled with SUVs sporting American flags. The Weather Channel used Old Glory as the watermark behind the local forecast. Car dealerships offered 0% financing and there were more victims' charities than heroin junkies.

    Suddenly, George 'Dubya' Bush was a hero for smiting the evil evil-doers of evil. Blinded by rage and revenge, this patriotism casts a darker shadow on the world than did our ignorance.

    ~~~

    God Bless America
    September 11, 2001

    This is so sick

    My God...
    Oh my dear God,
    what's gone wrong?

    We sit back so smugly in our cushy armchairs,
    warming our hands at the gently crackling fire of DEMOCRACY
    and LIBERTY
    and IMMUNITY...
    while our government shovels off money to fuel a holy war just far enough away
    to be an afterthought on page A17 of the New York Times...

    You see, the important numbers come to us in the form of the Nasdaq Index or touchdowns...
    not in lives lost to a car bomb in the middle of a shopping square half a world away full of brown people with funny names...
    not in illiterate children who go to schools that can't afford books because of the constant financial stream into our oil interests in a desert nation that depletes our resources like the leach of a politician's pocketbook...

    We just don't care enough.
    We just don't care to KNOW enough.

    We simply warm our hands...
    wash them of the filthy green ink smeared from each bill we send...

    But their blood is the color of that dirty ink
    And our faces are smeared with it

    Oh Christ, what do we do
    now that our Benjamin-green blood pours through the streets of Manhattan
    and past the cherry blossoms of DC
    and across some tranquil hillside in rural Pennsylvania?

    We do all we can do
    when the sanctity of our sacred American soil is raped and dephiled...
    We go on to CNN
    with our hands in the air
    and tears of feigned innocence streaming down our cheeks,
    and plead to a sky raining retribution and jumbo jets down upon us,
    "Why us, Lord? What did we do?"

    Ah, what did we do?

    We armed a nation of crusaders,
    and then sat back,
    FREE
    and IMMUNE,
    and SEPARATED,
    and read the sports page.

    The sleeping giant this time is not the United States.
    It is the PEOPLE of these oblivious United States...
    It is the vengeful anger of we who march across the planet spreading our magnificent tail feathers just wide enough to hide our personal agenda for the world...
    Are we not more like the world's Godfather
    than the world's police?
    Could we really be so arrogant
    as to never expect page A17 to be the front page?

    Sadly, this will not awaken any sort of AWARENESS in us,
    Or bring our patriotic sense alive in the name of all that is good and righteous...
    No, this will only incite a blind rage,
    a sordid revenge,
    the wrath of the American Bald Eagle
    as it rips its proud talons into the meat of turban-wearing fanatics and every last one of their goddamned camels!
    And after we gnash the guts out of each quivering radical with the ragged teeth of our oh-so-mighty army,
    we can sit back in our slightly less comfortable armchairs
    and warm our hands to the blazing fire of LIBERTY
    and tarnished PRIDE
    and a shattered pretense of INDEMNIFICATION.
    We can go back to shoveling our money into a holy war half a world away
    knowing full well
    that we can squash any ravel of towelheads that dares to resist our bidding...

    Now,
    however,
    we will do so
    while jumping out of our skin with every creek of the floor behind us.
    We will toss in our fat, comfortable sleep
    As the hellish images of the doomed,
    leaping from the windows of a buckling piller of commerce like rats in a sinking ship
    (Because to them, it's better to die trying
    than to die praying),
    Scream across our spoiled dreams

    For now,
    and only for now,
    we know IMMUNITY
    and INDEMNITY
    are both myths...
    We knew this once before
    We forgot it a long time ago

    God bless fuckin' America...
    and God bless every one of those ignorant souls claimed by the holy war afterthought on page A17 of the New York Times
    and God bless the greenbacks that sparked it all.
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  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    Originally posted by AlterEgo
    This was something i wrote maybe two years ago (during half an hour when i was supposed to be paying attentiton in class ;)) in response to September 11 and everything that followed. Basically an anti-war poem.

    "Our war on terror begins with al Qaeda, but it does not end there." - George W. Bush

    Agent Orange Kent State
    Cold War stalemate
    Israel Palestine
    watch out a land mine
    Catholic Protestant
    firebomb in a tenement
    poison gas trench barricades
    caught up in the Palmer raids
    Gettysburg Shiloh
    dead men in a row
    Khruschev JFK
    might have blown the world away
    Bloody Sunday Black September
    I'm too young to remember
    Guess what? It's still going
    bombs bursting blood flowing
    ashes cover people scared
    hoping that they will be spared
    children cry parents dead
    all the world gray and red
    everyone cloaed in fear
    What's going to happen here?
    Do I mean here or there?
    I don't now I don't care
    silent screams cities burn
    Won't the world ever learn?

    It makes me think
    of a bumper sticker I saw
    on a car on Bardstown Road
    "War doesn't prove who's right
    only who's left."

    i want to rap that for some reason...........i like it
  • Originally posted by sevensins
    i want to rap that for some reason...........i like it
    Someone actually did rap it when i gave it to him to see. LOL. Maybe i should be a rapper. A white female rapper. :D
    "Dude...it's a hamburger on top of a rocket ship!"
  • You should rap it at one of those Def Jam free for all things :)
    "You'll be able to hook up with plenty of folks who are looking for plenty of folks who are looking to hook up with plenty of folks who are."
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    He's a Black South African rap poet who is returning rap to the street away from the corporate market place. You know this one?

    (All copyright Lesego Rampolokeng, of course)

    TO GIL SCOTT HERON
    by Lesego Rampolokeng, poet, activist

    "RUN NIGGER RUN was inspiration injection
    of the LAST POET'S intonation insurrection
    gil scott-heron was suckled on
    a mouth to brain respiration rot's subversion
    liberation doctrine brought art to the fight
    for immunisation against the degeneration
    of garvey's children & the spawn of fanon
    on the run from the super-duper-shit-man
    now life's an acquisition
    the unborn have to make requisition
    the terror campaign's gone electronic
    in the bionic generation a computerised nation
    that won't falter at the altar of self-immolation
    satan collaboration spiritual contamination
    life experimentation with extermination
    gil scott-heron the revolution is on television



    tricks of the triple six cripple mystics
    at the feet of the crucifix no place for romantics
    relics of the FUNKADELIC ground on the FAMILY STONEd
    HENDRIX EXPERIENCE had GEORGE CLINTON for president
    in the street's PARLIAMENT
    no relation to the white louse saxophoney man
    but the one on the JAMES BROWN SEX MACHINE
    salaam alaikum MALCOLM-Xed the CLAN
    into a BOO-YA TRIBE of SHABAZZ
    made the ENEMY go PUBLIC on BASS
    brought the PRODUCTION out of the BOOGIE DOWN
    got the PARIS panther on the howl on the prowl on the tracks
    of its JUNGLE BROTHERS become POOR RIGHTEOUS TEACHERS
    not preachers of fractured futures
    when WINTER IN AMERICA froze bloodstreams in south africa
    gil scott heron the revolution got on television


    we choke in angeldust the stars go bust
    street art vision goes to rust
    creeping up the aliment of the pop-charts
    acting out industry designated parts
    of self-emascluation masturbation on the bbc sabc mtv screen
    & flip flop goes the hip hop nation
    in sudden homicide running down the blood-line
    of the griot running riot from dusk to the AFRICAN DAWN
    & they called it negroid hell descended devil child
    but black was MALOPOETIC mental attitude
    in FULANI frontal attack
    in psychological genocide time
    but now scott-heron, the industry's mutant children perform
    a systematic life devaluation coward-style
    they defile then revile the warrior profile
    & the revolution's pantomime is broadcast
    in an audio-visual bomb-blast
    gil scott heron the revolution is on television


    switch off that shit"
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