For Her

EvilToasterElf
EvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Your eyes to me are shards of sun
descending through the thinnest cloud
and in them I am stuck in time, a reflection
trapped in paradise.

A mirror cracked beneath your nose, in which
shined a dozen smiles, and each one alone had stopped
me cold, discerning from unspoken whispers
a longing which followed me
into my dreams.

Where dancing through thin waterfalls, bathed
in sterling moonlight, we pressed against each
other’s skin, and felt each other’s warmth within
our chests.

For every second arm in arm euphoria eclipsed
my thoughts, and every minute spent apart ripped
from my chest my crude life’s blood, which spilled
like memories

running swift, against the current of your hips, swaying
like wordless music, in a tune that drove men like
me insane. But in you I always find myself, like a phoenix
from the mires.

When you fall into that chasm, I will gladly dive within
until those slippery walls are ladders, and brightness fills
that empty space.
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  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    *jaw drops*
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • Yellow
    Yellow Posts: 699
    against the current...


    very nice :)
    It's all yellow.


  • insertlyrichere
    insertlyrichere Posts: 4
    that's beautiful
  • dreamncolor
    dreamncolor Posts: 380
    hmmm......i want to be *her* just right now.............too beautiful!!!
    i'll ride the wave where it takes me
  • EvilToasterElf
    EvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    thankyou all - she liked it as well
  • BhagavadGita
    BhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    pardon.................




























































































    holy fuck.
  • anOmis
    anOmis Posts: 223
    that was plain beautiful...
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • phishgod
    phishgod Posts: 133
    Cool dude!
    rockon,
    phishgod
  • i forget
    i forget Posts: 281
    You make the heart swell!
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by EvilToasterElf
    When you fall into that chasm, I will gladly dive within
    until those slippery walls are ladders, and brightness fills
    that empty space.

    Mmmmm, loved it! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen

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