Night Vision
EvilToasterElf
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First one I've written in a while, not quite done yet, any feedback is welcome
Night Vision
I find comfort in cities
when I see them as clusters
of orange lights in the dark horizon
nestled between hills that look
like spaces cut out of the Earth
When the only objects that exist
scuttle out of the headlights
and vanish into the fog
Solitude so rarely finds a man
as when he’s driving quietly
through the darkness
The moon is rendered a softer
presence as the lids of clouds close
and the stars cluster into their
formations like the beads of
moisture condensing into
rivulets of rain
Night Vision
I find comfort in cities
when I see them as clusters
of orange lights in the dark horizon
nestled between hills that look
like spaces cut out of the Earth
When the only objects that exist
scuttle out of the headlights
and vanish into the fog
Solitude so rarely finds a man
as when he’s driving quietly
through the darkness
The moon is rendered a softer
presence as the lids of clouds close
and the stars cluster into their
formations like the beads of
moisture condensing into
rivulets of rain
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keep tripping us....
~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~
F.ZAPPA
that sentence magically makes the moon softer.....it's such a soft statement....and smooth....the moon is scary....but you've made it kind of safe....
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