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Obi OnceObi Once Posts: 918
edited May 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
what to do..
with this feeling inside
feelings of love and affection
quiet and restless
lingering in my soul

a gold hart traded for silver
more robust and harder to break
losing its shine
pondering if it will ever
shine for someone again
your light's reflected now
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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    there's a steady glow, perhaps you're just too close to see it. but i do.

    shine on, shine on. :)
  • Obi OnceObi Once Posts: 918
    thanks coleen that gave a :) on my face
    your light's reflected now
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    then my work here is done. :)

    seriously though, i really did enjoy this and thank you for posting it.
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    welll
    some day it will come to haunt you
    that you didnt tell him quite the truth
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • Obi OnceObi Once Posts: 918
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    welll
    some day it will come to haunt you
    that you didnt tell him quite the truth
    uhm i wont ever be telling a him, i think..

    n btw its not a love for someone particular, more a felling that remains inside after loving someone..
    your light's reflected now
  • dreamncolordreamncolor Posts: 380
    well put obi - once again.
    simple, pure n true.
    i'll ride the wave where it takes me
  • PrettyNoosePrettyNoose Posts: 146
    tearfully sweet.
    her life was saved by Rock 'n' Roll
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