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Obi OnceObi Once Posts: 918
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
salted water
leaving my face
cleansing what is left
hiding my grace
it seemed like so much
at least
more than this
entangled emotions
time to end
this reminisce
your light's reflected now
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  • ExTReMe FrEAkExTReMe FrEAk Posts: 118
    You should add, "Here's Bob with the weather" to the end of your sig.

    Good peice by the way.
    Chasing a trail of smoke and reason.
  • dreamncolordreamncolor Posts: 380
    well done obi. :)
    much more fluid in its current form - good job.
    i'll ride the wave where it takes me
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Originally posted by ExTReMe FrEAk
    You should add, "Here's Bob with the weather" to the end of your sig.


    Hilarious idea!
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  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    your poem is obilicious! :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • Medicated-GeniusMedicated-Genius Posts: 359
    I think it's "here's Tom with the weather"

    Either way, Tool kicks ass!
  • Obi OnceObi Once Posts: 918
    Originally posted by of_the_girl
    your poem is obilicious! :)
    obilicious? :D sweeet
    your light's reflected now
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