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Obi OnceObi Once Posts: 918
edited April 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Stop mentioning that item *
in your empty messages
And just drop it off
or throw it out

So I can finally begin
with seeing the end
This carrot won’t move me
stupidity already wore me out

Your love was the water
that made me grow
Now it's in the root
of my lasting sorrow

It's hard to sort the truth
from your lies
And the manipulation
from your confessions

Yes I took the bait
now release your hooks
I can almost feel the sea
please just set me free

(*edited)
your light's reflected now
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Obi Once wrote:
    Stop mentioning that item *
    in your empty messages
    And just drop it off
    or throw it out

    So I can finally begin
    with seeing the end
    This carrot won’t move me
    stupidity already wore me out

    Your love was the water
    that made me grow
    Now it's in the root
    of my lasting sorrow

    It's hard to sort the truth
    from your lies
    And the manipulation
    from your confessions

    Yes I took the bait
    now release your hooks
    I can almost feel the sea
    please just set me free

    (*edited)

    bad ass stuff.
    i like this.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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