chick blogs (mysterious girl pt. 3)

deadnothingbetterdeadnothingbetter Posts: 2,202
edited December 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
intro:
so i've added a third installment to the mysterious girl poems. not really sure what the first ones are anymore... i hope some of you can remember them. i hope you like them. this one is about a girl that i met about 2.5 yrs ago from a friend i used to work with. we made friends and went out with her once but she declined after a few attempts for a second date. i teased her for flaking... but i remember her friend i used to work with say that she was absolutely in love with her ex who was sent to mexico for illegaly transporting mexicans here to the u.s. well, i assumed she was so in love with this fella taht it's maybe why she never bothered dealing with me. i have her on myspace and i read her blogs. her poetry is beautiful and sad... it's funny cause that's how i see her. i wish i could post them here. most of them give echo to her ex-boyfriend... others to friends. but i'm glad i could share this with you and share my poetry as well. it's short but hope it works well.


chick blogs (mysteriousgirlpt3)
i read her most everytime

the loneliness in my mind

she spills with sadness

through her bendy lines

such soft prose

she's like the every day girl

chick flicks

skating

gossip

wine, maybe

i give her my lines

she declines

it's been a year

that she melted me

and i still feel it's best

to keep safe distance

until she writes again
This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
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