Ungrateful

deadnothingbetterdeadnothingbetter Posts: 2,202
edited April 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Was just wondering what you guys thought about this song I wrote for my brother. He's the oldest and he's a pain in the ass. I recently got into a feud with him and almost got into a fist fight but I didn't want to use him as a punching bag thinking he deserves a fairer fight, so I wrote this song.


If I told you what I thought
Showed you what I felt
Would it make a difference?
All the battles I fought
Would my trophies melt
If I were to pierce my skin?

You’re a nuisance
You…
Ungrateful to me

Watch these towers shatter
Fall into your thick heart
As it breaks your pride
Would it really matter
If we tore these apart
Placed our faith inside?

You’re a nuisance
You creep
Ungrateful to me
Keep breaking my faith
I need it to fight demons like you
Ungrateful to me

When the world comes crashing down
And you sit with no one around
Would you like me to help you out
Anymore than you would to me?
You creep
Ungrateful to me
This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
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