who's your favorite poet? and what's your favorite poem of theirs?

mine is Langston Hughes. my favorite poem of his is Desert[/b_]

Desert

Anybody
Better than
Nobody.

In the barren dusk
Even the snake
That spirals
Terror on the sand-

Better than nobody
In this lonely
Land.
This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
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  • Jeremy1012Jeremy1012 Posts: 7,170
    Ezra Pound

    A Girl

    The tree has entered my hands,
    The sap has ascended my arms,
    The tree has grown in my breast-
    Downward,
    The branches grow out of me, like arms.

    Tree you are,
    Moss you are,
    You are violets with wind above them.
    A child - so high - you are,
    And all this is folly to the world.
    "I remember one night at Muzdalifa with nothing but the sky overhead, I lay awake amid sleeping Muslim brothers and I learned that pilgrims from every land — every colour, and class, and rank; high officials and the beggar alike — all snored in the same language"
  • electronblueelectronblue WPB Florida Posts: 3,460
    Ode: Intimations Of Immortality From Recollections Of Early Childhood [William Wordsworth. 1770–1850]


    There was a time when meadow, grove, and stream,
    The earth, and every common sight,
    To me did seem
    Apparelled in celestial light,
    The glory and the freshness of a dream.
    It is not now as it hath been of yore;--
    Turn wheresoe'er I may,
    By night or day,
    The things which I have seen I now can see no more.

    The Rainbow comes and goes,
    And lovely is the Rose,
    The Moon doth with delight
    Look round her when the heavens are bare,
    Waters on a starry night
    Are beautiful and fair;
    The sunshine is a glorious birth;
    But yet I know, where'er I go,
    That there hath past away a glory from the earth.

    Now, while the birds thus sing a joyous song,
    And while the young lambs bound
    As to the tabor's sound,
    To me alone there came a thought of grief:
    A timely utterance gave that thought relief,
    And I again am strong:
    The cataracts blow their trumpets from the steep;
    No more shall grief of mine the season wrong;
    I hear the Echoes through the mountains throng,
    The Winds come to me from the fields of sleep,
    And all the earth is gay;
    Land and sea
    Give themselves up to jollity,
    And with the heart of May
    Doth every Beast keep holiday;--
    Thou Child of Joy,
    Shout round me, let me hear thy shouts, thou happy
    Shepherd-boy!

    Ye blessed Creatures, I have heard the call
    Ye to each other make; I see
    The heavens laugh with you in your jubilee;
    My heart is at your festival,
    My head hath its coronal,
    The fulness of your bliss, I feel--I feel it all.
    Oh evil day! if I were sullen
    While Earth herself is adorning,
    This sweet May-morning,
    And the Children are culling
    On every side,
    In a thousand valleys far and wide,
    Fresh flowers; while the sun shines warm,
    And the Babe leaps up on his Mother's arm:--
    I hear, I hear, with joy I hear!
    --But there's a Tree, of many, one,
    A single Field which I have looked upon,
    Both of them speak of something that is gone:
    The Pansy at my feet
    Doth the same tale repeat:
    Whither is fled the visionary gleam?
    Where is it now, the glory and the dream?

    Our birth is but a sleep and a forgetting:
    The Soul that rises with us, our life's Star,
    Hath had elsewhere its setting,
    And cometh from afar:
    Not in entire forgetfulness,
    And not in utter nakedness,
    But trailing clouds of glory do we come
    From God, who is our home:
    Heaven lies about us in our infancy!
    Shades of the prison-house begin to close
    Upon the growing Boy,
    But He beholds the light, and whence it flows,
    He sees it in his joy;
    The Youth, who daily farther from the east
    Must travel, still is Nature's Priest,
    And by the vision splendid
    Is on his way attended;
    At length the Man perceives it die away,
    And fade into the light of common day.

    Earth fills her lap with pleasures of her own;
    Yearnings she hath in her own natural kind,
    And, even with something of a Mother's mind,
    And no unworthy aim,
    The homely Nurse doth all she can
    To make her Foster-child, her Inmate Man,
    Forget the glories he hath known,
    And that imperial palace whence he came.

    Behold the Child among his new-born blisses,
    A six years' Darling of a pigmy size!
    See, where 'mid work of his own hand he lies,
    Fretted by sallies of his mother's kisses,
    With light upon him from his father's eyes!
    See, at his feet, some little plan or chart,
    Some fragment from his dream of human life,
    Shaped by himself with newly-learned art;
    A wedding or a festival,
    A mourning or a funeral;
    And this hath now his heart,
    And unto this he frames his song:
    Then will he fit his tongue
    To dialogues of business, love, or strife;
    But it will not be long
    Ere this be thrown aside,
    And with new joy and pride
    The little Actor cons another part;
    Filling from time to time his "humorous stage"
    With all the Persons, down to palsied Age,
    That Life brings with her in her equipage;
    As if his whole vocation
    Were endless imitation.

    Thou, whose exterior semblance doth belie
    Thy Soul's immensity;
    Thou best Philosopher, who yet dost keep
    Thy heritage, thou Eye among the blind,
    That, deaf and silent, read'st the eternal deep,
    Haunted for ever by the eternal mind,--
    Mighty Prophet! Seer blest!
    On whom those truths do rest,
    Which we are toiling all our lives to find,
    In darkness lost, the darkness of the grave;
    Thou, over whom thy Immortality
    Broods like the Day, a Master o'er a Slave,
    A Presence which is not to be put by;
    Thou little Child, yet glorious in the might
    Of heaven-born freedom on thy being's height,
    Why with such earnest pains dost thou provoke
    The years to bring the inevitable yoke,
    Thus blindly with thy blessedness at strife?
    Full soon thy Soul shall have her earthly freight,
    And custom lie upon thee with a weight
    Heavy as frost, and deep almost as life!

    O joy! that in our embers
    Is something that doth live,
    That nature yet remembers
    What was so fugitive!
    The thought of our past years in me doth breed
    Perpetual benediction: not indeed
    For that which is most worthy to be blest--
    Delight and liberty, the simple creed
    Of Childhood, whether busy or at rest,
    With new-fledged hope still fluttering in his breast:--
    Not for these I raise
    The song of thanks and praise;
    But for those obstinate questionings
    Of sense and outward things,
    Fallings from us, vanishings;
    Blank misgivings of a Creature
    Moving about in worlds not realised,
    High instincts before which our mortal Nature
    Did tremble like a guilty Thing surprised:
    But for those first affections,
    Those shadowy recollections,
    Which, be they what they may,
    Are yet the fountain light of all our day,
    Are yet a master light of all our seeing;
    Uphold us, cherish, and have power to make
    Our noisy years seem moments in the being
    Of the eternal Silence: truths that wake,
    To perish never;
    Which neither listlessness, nor mad endeavour,
    Nor Man nor Boy,
    Nor all that is at enmity with joy,
    Can utterly abolish or destroy!
    Hence in a season of calm weather
    Though inland far we be,
    Our Souls have sight of that immortal sea
    Which brought us hither,
    Can in a moment travel thither,
    And see the Children sport upon the shore,
    And hear the mighty waters rolling evermore.

    Then sing, ye Birds, sing, sing a joyous song!
    And let the young Lambs bound
    As to the tabor's sound!
    We in thought will join your throng,
    Ye that pipe and ye that play,
    Ye that through your hearts to-day
    Feel the gladness of the May!
    What though the radiance which was once so bright
    Be now for ever taken from my sight,
    Though nothing can bring back the hour
    Of splendour in the grass, of glory in the flower;
    We will grieve not, rather find
    Strength in what remains behind;
    In the primal sympathy
    Which having been must ever be;
    In the soothing thoughts that spring
    Out of human suffering;
    In the faith that looks through death,
    In years that bring the philosophic mind.

    And O, ye Fountains, Meadows, Hills, and Groves,
    Forebode not any severing of our loves!
    Yet in my heart of hearts I feel your might;



    I only have relinquished one delight
    To live beneath your more habitual sway.
    I love the Brooks which down their channels fret,
    Even more than when I tripped lightly as they;
    The innocent brightness of a new-born Day
    Is lovely yet;
    The Clouds that gather round the setting sun
    Do take a sober colouring from an eye
    That hath kept watch o'er man's mortality;
    Another race hath been, and other palms are won.
    Thanks to the human heart by which we live,
    Thanks to its tenderness, its joys, and fears,
    To me the meanest flower that blows can give
    Thoughts that do often lie too deep for tears.
    ********************************
    "Forgive every being,
    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    Pablo Neruda is my favorite poet- don't have a favorite poem, but a favorite volume of his is Fully Empowered. My favorite volume of poetry of all is Handwriting by Michael Ondaatje.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Dylan Thomas is my favourite poet and writer, but my favourite writing of his isn't a poem:

    from Under Milk Wood:

    To begin at the beginning:

    It is spring, moonless night in the small town, starless and bible-black, the cobblestreets silent and the hunched, courters'-and-rabbits' wood limping invisible down to the sloeblack, slow, black, crowblack, fishingboat-bobbing sea. The houses are blind as moles (though moles see fine tonight in the snouting, velvet dingles) or blind as Captain Cat there in the muffled middle by the pump and the town clock, the shops in mourning, the Welfare Hall in widows' weeds. And all the people of the lulled and dumbfound town are sleeping now.

    Hush, the babies are sleeping, the farmers, the fishers, the tradesmen and pensioners, cobbler, schoolteacher, postman and publican, the undertaker and the fancy woman, drunkard, dressmaker, preacher, policeman, the webfoot cocklewomen and the tidy wives. Young girls lie bedded soft or glide in their dreams, with rings and trousseaux, bridesmaided by glow-worms down the aisles of the organplaying wood. The boys are dreaming wicked or of the bucking ranches of the night and the jollyrodgered sea. And the anthracite statues of the horses sleep in the fields, and the cows in the byres, and the dogs in the wetnosed yards; and the cats nap in the slant corners or lope sly, streaking and needling, on the one cloud of the roofs.

    You can hear the dew falling, and the hushed town breathing. Only your eyes are unclosed, to see the black and folded town fast, and slow, asleep. And you alone can hear the invisible starfall, the darkest-before-dawn minutely dewgrazed stir of the black, dab-filled sea where the Arethusa, the Curlew and the Skylark, Zanzibar, Rhiannon, the Rover, the Cormorant, and the Star of Wales tilt and ride.

    Listen. It is night moving in the streets, the processional salt slow musical wind in Coronation Street and Cockle Row, it is the grass growing on Llareggub Hill, dew fall, star fall, the sleep of birds in Milk Wood.
    Listen. It is night in the chill, squat chapel, hymning, in bonnet and brooch and bombazine black, butterfly choker and bootlace bow, coughing like nannygoats, sucking mintoes, fortywinking hallelujah; night in the four-ale, quiet as a domino; in Ocky Milkman's loft like a mouse with gloves; in Dai Bread's bakery flying like black flour. It is tonight in Donkey Street, trotting silent, with seaweed on its hooves, along the cockled cobbles, past curtained fernpot, text and trinket, harmonium, holy dresser, watercolours done by hand, china dog and rosy tin teacaddy. It is night neddying among the snuggeries of babies.

    Look. It is night, dumbly, royally winding through the Coronation cherry trees; going through the graveyard of Bethesda with winds gloved and folded, and dew doffed; tumbling by the Sailors Arms.
    Time passes. Listen. Time passes.
    Come closer now.

    Only you can hear the houses sleeping in the streets in the slow deep salt and silent black, bandaged night. Only you can see, in the blinded bedrooms, the coms and petticoats over the chairs, the jugs and basins, the glasses of teeth, Thou Shalt Not on the wall, and the yellowing dickybird-watching pictures of the dead. Only you can hear and see, behind the eyes of the sleepers, the movements and countries and mazes and colours and dismays and rainbows and tunes and wishes and flight and fall and despairs and big seas of their dreams.

    From where you are, you can hear their dreams.
    'We're learning songs for baby Jesus' birthday. His mum and dad were Merry and Joseph. He had a bed made of clay and the three kings bought him Gold, Frankenstein and Merv as presents.'

    - the great Sir Leo Harrison
  • Edgar Allan Poe
    Annabel Lee

    It was many and many a year ago
    In a kingdom by the sea
    That a maiden there lived whom you may know
    By the name of Annabel Lee
    And this maiden she lived with no other thought
    Than to love and be loved by me.

    I was a child and she was a child,
    In this kingdom by the sea;
    But we loved with a love that was more than love-
    I and my Annabel Lee;
    With a love that the winged seraphs of heaven
    Coveted her and me.

    And this was the reason that, long ago,
    In this kingdom by the sea,
    A wind blew out of a cloud, chilling
    My beautiful Annabel Lee;
    So that her highborn kinsman came
    And bore her away from me,
    To shut her up in a sepulchre
    In this kingdom by the sea.

    The angels, not half so happy in heaven,
    Went envying her and me-
    Yes!- that was the reason (as all men know,
    In this kingdom by the sea)
    That the wind came out of the cloud by night,
    Chilling and killing my Annabel Lee.

    But our love it was stronger by far than the love
    Of those who were older than we-
    Of many far wiser than we-
    And neither the angels in heaven above,
    Nor the demons down under the sea,
    Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
    Of the beautiful Annabel Lee.

    For the moon never beams without bringing me dreams
    Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
    And the stars never rise but I feel the bright eyes
    Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
    And so, all the night-tide, I lie down by the side
    Of my darling- my darling- my life and my bride,
    In the sepulchre there by the sea,
    In her tomb by the sounding sea.
    "If you're looking for someone to pull you out of that ditch, you're out of luck."
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Homer's Iliad, translated by Richmond Lattimore. Everything else is just margarine.
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Would I be arrogant in many eyes if I elected myself as my favorite?
    Which in many cases this is true, i am my favorite writer of poetry.
    I just don't have many favorites of anything except my humble self,
    and the lady I love, that's about it.
    However in many other cases I appreaciate writings from many people.
    Song writers are poets for heaven sakes.
    I don't have a favorite color, song, band/group, food, ect.
    (Though PJ is perfect for the favorite spot).
    Further-more I personally would rather write than sit for hours and read.
    I can not do that, I can not.
    My attention span is not that long, I loose interest fast, my mind wanders easily and on its own.(to keep my interest my balls gotta be stimulated)
    (I have to have electricity flowing or I am out to lunch in my head)
    So I write, it is what I do, I can.
    ADD head.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Jeremy1012Jeremy1012 Posts: 7,170
    Homer's Iliad, translated by Richmond Lattimore. Everything else is just margarine.
    D'ya like anything a bit shorter Richard? :)
    "I remember one night at Muzdalifa with nothing but the sky overhead, I lay awake amid sleeping Muslim brothers and I learned that pilgrims from every land — every colour, and class, and rank; high officials and the beggar alike — all snored in the same language"
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I'm not sure. I'll have to think about it for a day or so. :)
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  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    dead! awesome idea for a thread! :) just wish you'd put it on AET so we could EDIT!!! :rolleyes: (coz seems there will never be an edit function here on P & P where it's most needed!)

    Anyhoo, I don't have a favorite poet or a favorite poem, because like music, it's impossible to pick just one all time favorite.

    I do however have a very sentimental place in my heart for A.B. (Banjo) Paterson purely because he was the very first poet whose work attracted me, spoke to me, got inside my head. Tis hard to choose between these two poems of his for me so I'll post them both. :) And I'll try real hard not to just keep posting all my favorite poems after that! ;):o
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    I had written him a letter which I had, for want of better knowledge,
    sent to where I met him down the Lachlan, years ago,
    He was shearing when I knew him, so I sent the letter to him,
    Just on spec, addressed as follows, “Clancy, of The Overflow”.
    And an answer came directed in a writing unexpected,
    (And I think the same was written with a thumb-nail dipped in tar)
    'Twas his shearing mate who wrote it, and verbatim I will quote it:
    “Clancy’s gone to Queensland droving, and we don’t know where he are.”

    In my wild erratic fancy visions come to me of Clancy
    Gone a-droving “down the Cooper” where the Western drovers go;
    As the stock are slowly stringing, Clancy rides behind them singing,
    For the drover’s life has pleasures that the townsfolk never know.

    And the bush hath friends to meet him, and their kindly voices greet him
    In the murmur of the breezes and the river on its bars,
    And he sees the vision splendid of the sunlit plains extended,
    And at night the wondrous glory of the everlasting stars.

    I am sitting in my dingy little office, where a stingy
    Ray of sunlight struggles feebly down between the houses tall,
    And the foetid air and gritty of the dusty, dirty city
    Through the open window floating, spreads its foulness over all.

    And in place of lowing cattle, I can hear the fiendish rattle
    Of the tramways and the buses making hurry down the street,
    And the language uninviting of the gutter children fighting,
    Comes fitfully and faintly through the ceaseless tramp of feet.

    And the hurrying people daunt me, and their pallid faces haunt me
    As they shoulder one another in their rush and nervous haste,
    With their eager eyes and greedy, and their stunted forms and weedy,
    For townsfolk have no time to grow, they have no time to waste.

    And I somehow rather fancy that I’d like to change with Clancy,
    Like to take a turn at droving where the seasons come and go,
    While he faced the round eternal of the cash-book and the journal—
    But I doubt he’d suit the office, Clancy of The Overflow.
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    There was movement at the station, for the word had passed around
    That the colt from old Regret had got away,
    And had joined the wild bush horses — he was worth a thousand pound,
    So all the cracks had gathered to the fray.
    All the tried and noted riders from the stations near and far
    Had mustered at the homestead overnight,
    For the bushmen love hard riding where the wild bush horses are,
    And the stock-horse snuffs the battle with delight.

    There was Harrison, who made his pile when Pardon won the cup,
    The old man with his hair as white as snow;
    But few could ride beside him when his blood was fairly up—
    He would go wherever horse and man could go.
    And Clancy of the Overflow came down to lend a hand,
    No better horseman ever held the reins;
    For never horse could throw him while the saddle-girths would stand,
    He learnt to ride while droving on the plains.

    And one was there, a stripling on a small and weedy beast,
    He was something like a racehorse undersized,
    With a touch of Timor pony—three parts thoroughbred at least—
    And such as are by mountain horsemen prized.
    He was hard and tough and wiry—just the sort that won’t say die—
    There was courage in his quick impatient tread;
    And he bore the badge of gameness in his bright and fiery eye,
    And the proud and lofty carriage of his head.

    But still so slight and weedy, one would doubt his power to stay,
    And the old man said, “That horse will never do
    For a long and tiring gallop—lad, you’d better stop away,
    Those hills are far too rough for such as you.”
    So he waited sad and wistful—only Clancy stood his friend —
    “I think we ought to let him come,” he said;
    “I warrant he’ll be with us when he’s wanted at the end,
    For both his horse and he are mountain bred.

    “He hails from Snowy River, up by Kosciusko’s side,
    Where the hills are twice as steep and twice as rough,
    Where a horse’s hoofs strike firelight from the flint stones every stride,
    The man that holds his own is good enough.
    And the Snowy River riders on the mountains make their home,
    Where the river runs those giant hills between;
    I have seen full many horsemen since I first commenced to roam,
    But nowhere yet such horsemen have I seen.”

    So he went — they found the horses by the big mimosa clump —
    They raced away towards the mountain’s brow,
    And the old man gave his orders, ‘Boys, go at them from the jump,
    No use to try for fancy riding now.
    And, Clancy, you must wheel them, try and wheel them to the right.
    Ride boldly, lad, and never fear the spills,
    For never yet was rider that could keep the mob in sight,
    If once they gain the shelter of those hills.’

    So Clancy rode to wheel them—he was racing on the wing
    Where the best and boldest riders take their place,
    And he raced his stock-horse past them, and he made the ranges ring
    With the stockwhip, as he met them face to face.
    Then they halted for a moment, while he swung the dreaded lash,
    But they saw their well-loved mountain full in view,
    And they charged beneath the stockwhip with a sharp and sudden dash,
    And off into the mountain scrub they flew.

    Then fast the horsemen followed, where the gorges deep and black
    Resounded to the thunder of their tread,
    And the stockwhips woke the echoes, and they fiercely answered back
    From cliffs and crags that beetled overhead.
    And upward, ever upward, the wild horses held their way,
    Where mountain ash and kurrajong grew wide;
    And the old man muttered fiercely, “We may bid the mob good day,
    No man can hold them down the other side.”

    When they reached the mountain’s summit, even Clancy took a pull,
    It well might make the boldest hold their breath,
    The wild hop scrub grew thickly, and the hidden ground was full
    Of wombat holes, and any slip was death.
    But the man from Snowy River let the pony have his head,
    And he swung his stockwhip round and gave a cheer,
    And he raced him down the mountain like a torrent down its bed,
    While the others stood and watched in very fear.

    He sent the flint stones flying, but the pony kept his feet,
    He cleared the fallen timber in his stride,
    And the man from Snowy River never shifted in his seat—
    It was grand to see that mountain horseman ride.
    Through the stringy barks and saplings, on the rough and broken ground,
    Down the hillside at a racing pace he went;
    And he never drew the bridle till he landed safe and sound,
    At the bottom of that terrible descent.

    He was right among the horses as they climbed the further hill,
    And the watchers on the mountain standing mute,
    Saw him ply the stockwhip fiercely, he was right among them still,
    As he raced across the clearing in pursuit.
    Then they lost him for a moment, where two mountain gullies met
    In the ranges, but a final glimpse reveals
    On a dim and distant hillside the wild horses racing yet,
    With the man from Snowy River at their heels.

    And he ran them single-handed till their sides were white with foam.
    He followed like a bloodhound on their track,
    Till they halted cowed and beaten, then he turned their heads for home,
    And alone and unassisted brought them back.
    But his hardy mountain pony he could scarcely raise a trot,
    He was blood from hip to shoulder from the spur;
    But his pluck was still undaunted, and his courage fiery hot,
    For never yet was mountain horse a cur.

    And down by Kosciusko, where the pine-clad ridges raise
    Their torn and rugged battlements on high,
    Where the air is clear as crystal, and the white stars fairly blaze
    At midnight in the cold and frosty sky,
    And where around the Overflow the reedbeds sweep and sway
    To the breezes, and the rolling plains are wide,
    The man from Snowy River is a household word to-day,
    And the stockmen tell the story of his ride.
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • Jeremy1012Jeremy1012 Posts: 7,170
    I really enjoyed those Jeanie :) I'm not normally big on rhyming. You have to be a genius to rhyme well with poetry and 9/10 times it just sounds like a nursery rhyme but those two are really good/
    "I remember one night at Muzdalifa with nothing but the sky overhead, I lay awake amid sleeping Muslim brothers and I learned that pilgrims from every land — every colour, and class, and rank; high officials and the beggar alike — all snored in the same language"
  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    Jeremy1012 wrote:
    I really enjoyed those Jeanie :) I'm not normally big on rhyming. You have to be a genius to rhyme well with poetry and 9/10 times it just sounds like a nursery rhyme but those two are really good/


    He did it so well, I think. I love the pace, and the word pictures he paints. Like he's got a brush really. Just captures my imagination.

    Badly rhymed poetry sucks! But when you read the masters at it, well it really does blow your mind. And makes you feel like a dick for attempting your own little pissy efforts. :D Well me anyway!

    Anyway, don't get me started with rhyming poetry coz I have a whole bunch of favorites and dead did only want us to pick one! :eek: An impossible task for me! :D
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • Jeremy1012Jeremy1012 Posts: 7,170
    Jeanie wrote:
    He did it so well, I think. I love the pace, and the word pictures he paints. Like he's got a brush really. Just captures my imagination.

    Badly rhymed poetry sucks! But when you read the masters at it, well it really does blow your mind. And makes you feel like a dick for attempting your own little pissy efforts. :D Well me anyway!

    Anyway, don't get me started with rhyming poetry coz I have a whole bunch of favorites and dead did only want us to pick one! :eek: An impossible task for me! :D
    Yeah, badly rhymed stuff is horrible. My choice of favourite poet, Ezra Pound, made a brilliant comment on some couplets the T.S Eliot included in one of his poems. Pound basically told him that Alexander Pope had already mastered the couplet and any attempt to match it would be "defecating" on the device. Eliot listened to him and didn't do it again :D

    I occasionally through a couple of internal rhymes into my poems to help them flow but I never tend to end lines on rhymes. I am NOT good enough.
    "I remember one night at Muzdalifa with nothing but the sky overhead, I lay awake amid sleeping Muslim brothers and I learned that pilgrims from every land — every colour, and class, and rank; high officials and the beggar alike — all snored in the same language"
  • Jeremy1012 wrote:
    Yeah, badly rhymed stuff is horrible. My choice of favourite poet, Ezra Pound, made a brilliant comment on some couplets the T.S Eliot included in one of his poems. Pound basically told him that Alexander Pope had already mastered the couplet and any attempt to match it would be "defecating" on the device. Eliot listened to him and didn't do it again :D

    I occasionally through a couple of internal rhymes into my poems to help them flow but I never tend to end lines on rhymes. I am NOT good enough.
    i hate rhyming too... it depends how it's put together for me to like it.
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  • Jeanie wrote:
    dead! awesome idea for a thread! :) just wish you'd put it on AET so we could EDIT!!! :rolleyes: (coz seems there will never be an edit function here on P & P where it's most needed!)

    Anyhoo, I don't have a favorite poet or a favorite poem, because like music, it's impossible to pick just one all time favorite.

    I do however have a very sentimental place in my heart for A.B. (Banjo) Paterson purely because he was the very first poet whose work attracted me, spoke to me, got inside my head. Tis hard to choose between these two poems of his for me so I'll post them both. :) And I'll try real hard not to just keep posting all my favorite poems after that! ;):o
    had no idea you were into poetry. i'm glad you found this thread. thanks for the poems. i'm a get into this.
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  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    Jeremy1012 wrote:
    Yeah, badly rhymed stuff is horrible. My choice of favourite poet, Ezra Pound, made a brilliant comment on some couplets the T.S Eliot included in one of his poems. Pound basically told him that Alexander Pope had already mastered the couplet and any attempt to match it would be "defecating" on the device. Eliot listened to him and didn't do it again :D

    I occasionally through a couple of internal rhymes into my poems to help them flow but I never tend to end lines on rhymes. I am NOT good enough.


    :) Ah yes! hehe! I can't say I'm well educated when it comes to poetry anyway. I just know what I like and as it happens most of the stuff that speaks to me rhymes. But I think it rhymes well. Tis mostly really old stuff anyway.

    Sometimes I manage to rhyme well enough but mostly I don't bother. I usually just wanted to get the words out. meh! Tis mostly rubbish my stuff anyway. I liked that one you posted earlier J. I mean to post. I'll go do it now. :)

    Oh and stuff it! :p Here's another one that rhymes that I adore. :)
    NOPE!!!

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  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    He did not wear his scarlet coat,
    For blood and wine are red,
    And blood and wine were on his hands
    When they found him with the dead,
    The poor dead woman whom he loved,
    And murdered in her bed.

    He walked amongst the Trial Men
    In a suit of shabby grey;
    A cricket cap was on his head,
    And his step seemed light and gay;
    But I never saw a man who looked
    So wistfully at the day.

    I never saw a man who looked
    With such a wistful eye
    Upon that little tent of blue
    Which prisoners call the sky,
    And at every drifting cloud that went
    With sails of silver by.

    I walked, with other souls in pain,
    Within another ring,
    And was wondering if the man had done
    A great or little thing,
    When a voice behind me whispered low,
    "That fellow's got to swing."

    Dear Christ! the very prison walls
    Suddenly seemed to reel,
    And the sky above my head became
    Like a casque of scorching steel;
    And, though I was a soul in pain,
    My pain I could not feel.

    I only knew what hunted thought
    Quickened his step, and why
    He looked upon the garish day
    With such a wistful eye;
    The man had killed the thing he loved
    And so he had to die.

    Yet each man kills the thing he loves
    By each let this be heard,
    Some do it with a bitter look,
    Some with a flattering word,
    The coward does it with a kiss,
    The brave man with a sword!

    Some kill their love when they are young,
    And some when they are old;
    Some strangle with the hands of Lust,
    Some with the hands of Gold:
    The kindest use a knife, because
    The dead so soon grow cold.

    Some love too little, some too long,
    Some sell, and others buy;
    Some do the deed with many tears,
    And some without a sigh:
    For each man kills the thing he loves,
    Yet each man does not die.

    He does not die a death of shame
    On a day of dark disgrace,
    Nor have a noose about his neck,
    Nor a cloth upon his face,
    Nor drop feet foremost through the floor
    Into an empty place

    He does not sit with silent men
    Who watch him night and day;
    Who watch him when he tries to weep,
    And when he tries to pray;
    Who watch him lest himself should rob
    The prison of its prey.

    He does not wake at dawn to see
    Dread figures throng his room,
    The shivering Chaplain robed in white,
    The Sheriff stern with gloom,
    And the Governor all in shiny black,
    With the yellow face of Doom.

    He does not rise in piteous haste
    To put on convict-clothes,
    While some coarse-mouthed Doctor gloats, and notes
    Each new and nerve-twitched pose,
    Fingering a watch whose little ticks
    Are like horrible hammer-blows.

    He does not know that sickening thirst
    That sands one's throat, before
    The hangman with his gardener's gloves
    Slips through the padded door,
    And binds one with three leathern thongs,
    That the throat may thirst no more.

    He does not bend his head to hear
    The Burial Office read,
    Nor, while the terror of his soul
    Tells him he is not dead,
    Cross his own coffin, as he moves
    Into the hideous shed.

    He does not stare upon the air
    Through a little roof of glass;
    He does not pray with lips of clay
    For his agony to pass;
    Nor feel upon his shuddering cheek
    The kiss of Caiaphas.

    II

    Six weeks our guardsman walked the yard,
    In a suit of shabby grey:
    His cricket cap was on his head,
    And his step seemed light and gay,
    But I never saw a man who looked
    So wistfully at the day.

    I never saw a man who looked
    With such a wistful eye
    Upon that little tent of blue
    Which prisoners call the sky,
    And at every wandering cloud that trailed
    Its ravelled fleeces by.

    He did not wring his hands, as do
    Those witless men who dare
    To try to rear the changeling Hope
    In the cave of black Despair:
    He only looked upon the sun,
    And drank the morning air.

    He did not wring his hands nor weep,
    Nor did he peek or pine,
    But he drank the air as though it held
    Some healthful anodyne;
    With open mouth he drank the sun
    As though it had been wine!

    And I and all the souls in pain,
    Who tramped the other ring,
    Forgot if we ourselves had done
    A great or little thing,
    And watched with gaze of dull amaze
    The man who had to swing.

    And strange it was to see him pass
    With a step so light and gay,
    And strange it was to see him look
    So wistfully at the day,
    And strange it was to think that he
    Had such a debt to pay.

    For oak and elm have pleasant leaves
    That in the spring-time shoot:
    But grim to see is the gallows-tree,
    With its adder-bitten root,
    And, green or dry, a man must die
    Before it bears its fruit!

    The loftiest place is that seat of grace
    For which all worldlings try:
    But who would stand in hempen band
    Upon a scaffold high,
    And through a murderer's collar take
    His last look at the sky?

    It is sweet to dance to violins
    When Love and Life are fair:
    To dance to flutes, to dance to lutes
    Is delicate and rare:
    But it is not sweet with nimble feet
    To dance upon the air!

    So with curious eyes and sick surmise
    We watched him day by day,
    And wondered if each one of us
    Would end the self-same way,
    For none can tell to what red Hell
    His sightless soul may stray.

    At last the dead man walked no more
    Amongst the Trial Men,
    And I knew that he was standing up
    In the black dock's dreadful pen,
    And that never would I see his face
    In God's sweet world again.

    Like two doomed ships that pass in storm
    We had crossed each other's way:
    But we made no sign, we said no word,
    We had no word to say;
    For we did not meet in the holy night,
    But in the shameful day.

    A prison wall was round us both,
    Two outcast men were we:
    The world had thrust us from its heart,
    And God from out His care:
    And the iron gin that waits for Sin
    Had caught us in its snare.

    III

    In Debtors' Yard the stones are hard,
    And the dripping wall is high,
    So it was there he took the air
    Beneath the leaden sky,
    And by each side a Warder walked,
    For fear the man might die.

    Or else he sat with those who watched
    His anguish night and day;
    Who watched him when he rose to weep,
    And when he crouched to pray;
    Who watched him lest himself should rob
    Their scaffold of its prey.

    The Governor was strong upon
    The Regulations Act:
    The Doctor said that Death was but
    A scientific fact:
    And twice a day the Chaplain called
    And left a little tract.

    And twice a day he smoked his pipe,
    And drank his quart of beer:
    His soul was resolute, and held
    No hiding-place for fear;
    He often said that he was glad
    The hangman's hands were near.

    But why he said so strange a thing
    No Warder dared to ask:
    For he to whom a watcher's doom
    Is given as his task,
    Must set a lock upon his lips,
    And make his face a mask.

    Or else he might be moved, and try
    To comfort or console:
    And what should Human Pity do
    Pent up in Murderers' Hole?
    What word of grace in such a place
    Could help a brother's soul?

    With slouch and swing around the ring
    We trod the Fool's Parade!
    We did not care: we knew we were
    The Devil's Own Brigade:
    And shaven head and feet of lead
    Make a merry masquerade.

    We tore the tarry rope to shreds
    With blunt and bleeding nails;
    We rubbed the doors, and scrubbed the floors,
    And cleaned the shining rails:
    And, rank by rank, we soaped the plank,
    And clattered with the pails.

    We sewed the sacks, we broke the stones,
    We turned the dusty drill:
    We banged the tins, and bawled the hymns,
    And sweated on the mill:
    But in the heart of every man
    Terror was lying still.

    So still it lay that every day
    Crawled like a weed-clogged wave:
    And we forgot the bitter lot
    That waits for fool and knave,
    Till once, as we tramped in from work,
    We passed an open grave.

    With yawning mouth the yellow hole
    Gaped for a living thing;
    The very mud cried out for blood
    To the thirsty asphalte ring:
    And we knew that ere one dawn grew fair
    Some prisoner had to swing.

    Right in we went, with soul intent
    On Death and Dread and Doom:
    The hangman, with his little bag,
    Went shuffling through the gloom
    And each man trembled as he crept
    Into his numbered tomb.

    That night the empty corridors
    Were full of forms of Fear,
    And up and down the iron town
    Stole feet we could not hear,
    And through the bars that hide the stars
    White faces seemed to peer.

    He lay as one who lies and dreams
    In a pleasant meadow-land,
    The watcher watched him as he slept,
    And could not understand
    How one could sleep so sweet a sleep
    With a hangman close at hand?

    But there is no sleep when men must weep
    Who never yet have wept:
    So we—the fool, the fraud, the knave—
    That endless vigil kept,
    And through each brain on hands of pain
    Another's terror crept.

    Alas! it is a fearful thing
    To feel another's guilt!
    For, right within, the sword of Sin
    Pierced to its poisoned hilt,
    And as molten lead were the tears we shed
    For the blood we had not spilt.

    The Warders with their shoes of felt
    Crept by each padlocked door,
    And peeped and saw, with eyes of awe,
    Grey figures on the floor,
    And wondered why men knelt to pray
    Who never prayed before.

    All through the night we knelt and prayed,
    Mad mourners of a corpse!
    The troubled plumes of midnight were
    The plumes upon a hearse:
    And bitter wine upon a sponge
    Was the savour of Remorse.

    The cock crew, the red cock crew,
    But never came the day:
    And crooked shape of Terror crouched,
    In the corners where we lay:
    And each evil sprite that walks by night
    Before us seemed to play.

    They glided past, they glided fast,
    Like travellers through a mist:
    They mocked the moon in a rigadoon
    Of delicate turn and twist,
    And with formal pace and loathsome grace
    The phantoms kept their tryst.

    With mop and mow, we saw them go,
    Slim shadows hand in hand:
    About, about, in ghostly rout
    They trod a saraband:
    And the damned grotesques made arabesques,
    Like the wind upon the sand!

    With the pirouettes of marionettes,
    They tripped on pointed tread:
    But with flutes of Fear they filled the ear,
    As their grisly masque they led,
    And loud they sang, and loud they sang,
    For they sang to wake the dead.

    "Oho!" they cried, "The world is wide,
    But fettered limbs go lame!
    And once, or twice, to throw the dice
    Is a gentlemanly game,
    But he does not win who plays with Sin
    In the secret House of Shame."

    No things of air these antics were
    That frolicked with such glee:
    To men whose lives were held in gyves,
    And whose feet might not go free,
    Ah! wounds of Christ! they were living things,
    Most terrible to see.

    Around, around, they waltzed and wound;
    Some wheeled in smirking pairs:
    With the mincing step of demirep
    Some sidled up the stairs:
    And with subtle sneer, and fawning leer,
    Each helped us at our prayers.

    The morning wind began to moan,
    But still the night went on:
    Through its giant loom the web of gloom
    Crept till each thread was spun:
    And, as we prayed, we grew afraid
    Of the Justice of the Sun.

    The moaning wind went wandering round
    The weeping prison-wall:
    Till like a wheel of turning-steel
    We felt the minutes crawl:
    O moaning wind! what had we done
    To have such a seneschal?

    At last I saw the shadowed bars
    Like a lattice wrought in lead,
    Move right across the whitewashed wall
    That faced my three-plank bed,
    And I knew that somewhere in the world
    God's dreadful dawn was red.

    At six o'clock we cleaned our cells,
    At seven all was still,
    But the sough and swing of a mighty wing
    The prison seemed to fill,
    For the Lord of Death with icy breath
    Had entered in to kill.

    He did not pass in purple pomp,
    Nor ride a moon-white steed.
    Three yards of cord and a sliding board
    Are all the gallows' need:
    So with rope of shame the Herald came
    To do the secret deed.

    We were as men who through a fen
    Of filthy darkness grope:
    We did not dare to breathe a prayer,
    Or give our anguish scope:
    Something was dead in each of us,
    And what was dead was Hope.

    For Man's grim Justice goes its way,
    And will not swerve aside:
    It slays the weak, it slays the strong,
    It has a deadly stride:
    With iron heel it slays the strong,
    The monstrous parricide!

    We waited for the stroke of eight:
    Each tongue was thick with thirst:
    For the stroke of eight is the stroke of Fate
    That makes a man accursed,
    And Fate will use a running noose
    For the best man and the worst.

    We had no other thing to do,
    Save to wait for the sign to come:
    So, like things of stone in a valley lone,
    Quiet we sat and dumb:
    But each man's heart beat thick and quick
    Like a madman on a drum!

    With sudden shock the prison-clock
    Smote on the shivering air,
    And from all the gaol rose up a wail
    Of impotent despair,
    Like the sound that frightened marshes hear
    >From a leper in his lair.

    And as one sees most fearful things
    In the crystal of a dream,
    We saw the greasy hempen rope
    Hooked to the blackened beam,
    And heard the prayer the hangman's snare
    Strangled into a scream.

    And all the woe that moved him so
    That he gave that bitter cry,
    And the wild regrets, and the bloody sweats,
    None knew so well as I:
    For he who live more lives than one
    More deaths than one must die.
    NOPE!!!

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  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    IV

    There is no chapel on the day
    On which they hang a man:
    The Chaplain's heart is far too sick,
    Or his face is far to wan,
    Or there is that written in his eyes
    Which none should look upon.

    So they kept us close till nigh on noon,
    And then they rang the bell,
    And the Warders with their jingling keys
    Opened each listening cell,
    And down the iron stair we tramped,
    Each from his separate Hell.

    Out into God's sweet air we went,
    But not in wonted way,
    For this man's face was white with fear,
    And that man's face was grey,
    And I never saw sad men who looked
    So wistfully at the day.

    I never saw sad men who looked
    With such a wistful eye
    Upon that little tent of blue
    We prisoners called the sky,
    And at every careless cloud that passed
    In happy freedom by.

    But their were those amongst us all
    Who walked with downcast head,
    And knew that, had each got his due,
    They should have died instead:
    He had but killed a thing that lived
    Whilst they had killed the dead.

    For he who sins a second time
    Wakes a dead soul to pain,
    And draws it from its spotted shroud,
    And makes it bleed again,
    And makes it bleed great gouts of blood
    And makes it bleed in vain!

    Like ape or clown, in monstrous garb
    With crooked arrows starred,
    Silently we went round and round
    The slippery asphalte yard;
    Silently we went round and round,
    And no man spoke a word.

    Silently we went round and round,
    And through each hollow mind
    The memory of dreadful things
    Rushed like a dreadful wind,
    An Horror stalked before each man,
    And terror crept behind.

    The Warders strutted up and down,
    And kept their herd of brutes,
    Their uniforms were spick and span,
    And they wore their Sunday suits,
    But we knew the work they had been at
    By the quicklime on their boots.

    For where a grave had opened wide,
    There was no grave at all:
    Only a stretch of mud and sand
    By the hideous prison-wall,
    And a little heap of burning lime,
    That the man should have his pall.

    For he has a pall, this wretched man,
    Such as few men can claim:
    Deep down below a prison-yard,
    Naked for greater shame,
    He lies, with fetters on each foot,
    Wrapt in a sheet of flame!

    And all the while the burning lime
    Eats flesh and bone away,
    It eats the brittle bone by night,
    And the soft flesh by the day,
    It eats the flesh and bones by turns,
    But it eats the heart alway.

    For three long years they will not sow
    Or root or seedling there:
    For three long years the unblessed spot
    Will sterile be and bare,
    And look upon the wondering sky
    With unreproachful stare.

    They think a murderer's heart would taint
    Each simple seed they sow.
    It is not true! God's kindly earth
    Is kindlier than men know,
    And the red rose would but blow more red,
    The white rose whiter blow.

    Out of his mouth a red, red rose!
    Out of his heart a white!
    For who can say by what strange way,
    Christ brings his will to light,
    Since the barren staff the pilgrim bore
    Bloomed in the great Pope's sight?

    But neither milk-white rose nor red
    May bloom in prison air;
    The shard, the pebble, and the flint,
    Are what they give us there:
    For flowers have been known to heal
    A common man's despair.

    So never will wine-red rose or white,
    Petal by petal, fall
    On that stretch of mud and sand that lies
    By the hideous prison-wall,
    To tell the men who tramp the yard
    That God's Son died for all.

    Yet though the hideous prison-wall
    Still hems him round and round,
    And a spirit man not walk by night
    That is with fetters bound,
    And a spirit may not weep that lies
    In such unholy ground,

    He is at peace—this wretched man—
    At peace, or will be soon:
    There is no thing to make him mad,
    Nor does Terror walk at noon,
    For the lampless Earth in which he lies
    Has neither Sun nor Moon.

    They hanged him as a beast is hanged:
    They did not even toll
    A requiem that might have brought
    Rest to his startled soul,
    But hurriedly they took him out,
    And hid him in a hole.

    They stripped him of his canvas clothes,
    And gave him to the flies;
    They mocked the swollen purple throat
    And the stark and staring eyes:
    And with laughter loud they heaped the shroud
    In which their convict lies.

    The Chaplain would not kneel to pray
    By his dishonoured grave:
    Nor mark it with that blessed Cross
    That Christ for sinners gave,
    Because the man was one of those
    Whom Christ came down to save.

    Yet all is well; he has but passed
    To Life's appointed bourne:
    And alien tears will fill for him
    Pity's long-broken urn,
    For his mourner will be outcast men,
    And outcasts always mourn.

    V

    I know not whether Laws be right,
    Or whether Laws be wrong;
    All that we know who lie in goal
    Is that the wall is strong;
    And that each day is like a year,
    A year whose days are long.

    But this I know, that every Law
    That men have made for Man,
    Since first Man took his brother's life,
    And the sad world began,
    But straws the wheat and saves the chaff
    With a most evil fan.

    This too I know—and wise it were
    If each could know the same—
    That every prison that men build
    Is built with bricks of shame,
    And bound with bars lest Christ should see
    How men their brothers maim.

    With bars they blur the gracious moon,
    And blind the goodly sun:
    And they do well to hide their Hell,
    For in it things are done
    That Son of God nor son of Man
    Ever should look upon!

    The vilest deeds like poison weeds
    Bloom well in prison-air:
    It is only what is good in Man
    That wastes and withers there:
    Pale Anguish keeps the heavy gate,
    And the Warder is Despair

    For they starve the little frightened child
    Till it weeps both night and day:
    And they scourge the weak, and flog the fool,
    And gibe the old and grey,
    And some grow mad, and all grow bad,
    And none a word may say.

    Each narrow cell in which we dwell
    Is foul and dark latrine,
    And the fetid breath of living Death
    Chokes up each grated screen,
    And all, but Lust, is turned to dust
    In Humanity's machine.

    The brackish water that we drink
    Creeps with a loathsome slime,
    And the bitter bread they weigh in scales
    Is full of chalk and lime,
    And Sleep will not lie down, but walks
    Wild-eyed and cries to Time.

    But though lean Hunger and green Thirst
    Like asp with adder fight,
    We have little care of prison fare,
    For what chills and kills outright
    Is that every stone one lifts by day
    Becomes one's heart by night.

    With midnight always in one's heart,
    And twilight in one's cell,
    We turn the crank, or tear the rope,
    Each in his separate Hell,
    And the silence is more awful far
    Than the sound of a brazen bell.

    And never a human voice comes near
    To speak a gentle word:
    And the eye that watches through the door
    Is pitiless and hard:
    And by all forgot, we rot and rot,
    With soul and body marred.

    And thus we rust Life's iron chain
    Degraded and alone:
    And some men curse, and some men weep,
    And some men make no moan:
    But God's eternal Laws are kind
    And break the heart of stone.

    And every human heart that breaks,
    In prison-cell or yard,
    Is as that broken box that gave
    Its treasure to the Lord,
    And filled the unclean leper's house
    With the scent of costliest nard.

    Ah! happy day they whose hearts can break
    And peace of pardon win!
    How else may man make straight his plan
    And cleanse his soul from Sin?
    How else but through a broken heart
    May Lord Christ enter in?

    And he of the swollen purple throat.
    And the stark and staring eyes,
    Waits for the holy hands that took
    The Thief to Paradise;
    And a broken and a contrite heart
    The Lord will not despise.

    The man in red who reads the Law
    Gave him three weeks of life,
    Three little weeks in which to heal
    His soul of his soul's strife,
    And cleanse from every blot of blood
    The hand that held the knife.

    And with tears of blood he cleansed the hand,
    The hand that held the steel:
    For only blood can wipe out blood,
    And only tears can heal:
    And the crimson stain that was of Cain
    Became Christ's snow-white seal.

    VI

    In Reading gaol by Reading town
    There is a pit of shame,
    And in it lies a wretched man
    Eaten by teeth of flame,
    In burning winding-sheet he lies,
    And his grave has got no name.

    And there, till Christ call forth the dead,
    In silence let him lie:
    No need to waste the foolish tear,
    Or heave the windy sigh:
    The man had killed the thing he loved,
    And so he had to die.

    And all men kill the thing they love,
    By all let this be heard,
    Some do it with a bitter look,
    Some with a flattering word,
    The coward does it with a kiss,
    The brave man with a sword!
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    had no idea you were into poetry. i'm glad you found this thread. thanks for the poems. i'm a get into this.

    :D Well actually I'd been toying with the idea of starting one like this meself, so I was pretty pleased to discover you'd been thinking the same. :)
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • Jeanie wrote:
    :D Well actually I'd been toying with the idea of starting one like this meself, so I was pretty pleased to discover you'd been thinking the same. :)
    you flirting with me? :p
    This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    you flirting with me? :p

    No! :D Do you want me to? ;)
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • Jeanie wrote:
    No! :D Do you want me to? ;)
    if you're not too shy ;) i'm okay with it.
    This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    if you're not too shy ;) i'm okay with it.

    :D Well no one could accuse me of being shy! :D

    But my hearts not really in it today, sorry love, nothing personal. :)

    How bout you post another poem? I mean I would but I already posted 3! :o
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • To Artina

    I will take your heart
    I will take your soul out of your body
    As though I were God.
    I will not be satisfied
    With the little words you say to me.
    I will not be satisfied
    With the touch of your hand
    Nor the sweet of your lips alone.
    I will take your heart for mine.
    I will take your soul.
    I will be God when it comes to you.
    This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
  • Sea Calm

    How still,
    How strangely still
    The water is today.
    It is not good
    For water
    To be so still that way.
    This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
  • To Artina

    I will take your heart
    I will take your soul out of your body
    As though I were God.
    I will not be satisfied
    With the little words you say to me.
    I will not be satisfied
    With the touch of your hand
    Nor the sweet of your lips alone.
    I will take your heart for mine.
    I will take your soul.
    I will be God when it comes to you.
    you can almost make a girl have an orgasm with these words... langston hughes is the shit.
    This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
  • Wonder
    And pain
    And terror,
    And sick silly songs
    of sorrow,
    And the marrow
    Of the bone
    Of life
    Are smeared across
    Her mouth.

    The road
    From Verona
    To Mantova
    Is dusty
    With the drought.
    This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    you can almost make a girl have an orgasm with these words... langston hughes is the shit.

    speaking of lady havin an orgasm through words/poetry.


    Fly with you.

    For now, I’m holding you in my thought and memory.
    Soon, I’ll be holding you again in my arms.
    Till then, all I have is a dream to hold.
    Needing you, more than I need.
    Wanting you, more than I want.
    Desire for you, deep inside, screams for you.
    Dreams of you, in my never-ending thoughts.
    In my heart, my feelings are yours to hold.
    Never before have I felt like this.
    Together we fall, up into the sky.
    Searching for our star, moonlight guides us.
    Past the sun we soar, angelic wings spread.
    As if we’re angels, conquering the sky.
    Loving on a star, the galaxy our bed.
    We dance across time and space touching.
    Your beauty is in my hands.
    Together, we share this miracle.
    Flying with you to beyond forever.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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