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The girl at the corner

deadnothingbetterdeadnothingbetter Posts: 2,202
edited April 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
A guy is standing in a corner of a street. Out of nowhere a beautiful girl walks up to him and kisses him for about 30 seconds straight. She stops. Then she leaves. He is standing there wondering what the hell just happened. The next week he waits again: same time, same day and same spot. She gets there and kisses him again for 30 seconds straight. She stops. Then she leaves again without saying anything. He tells his friends about it. Just the same they all go one by one. They wait. She gets there. She kisses them. She leaves. Out of nowhere and for no reason. Then, one particular guy goes. He waits. And waits. Finally she gets there. She stops and stares at him. She doesn't kiss him. She just stares with sadness. So he stares back with a puzzled face and flinches. He says, "hello?" She stares. And stares. And stares. So he leaves and thinks how stupid it was for him to go there. As he is leaving, she yells at him, "it's nice to finally meet you." Confused at her response, he watches intently wondering what she meant by it. She leaves. Never returns. Never kisses another man.
This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i was thinkin it was a joke when i was readin along.
    then nothing.
    i think its cool.
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    It's an interesting little story.

    There musta been something about the last guy that was different. I wonder what it was?
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  • gue_bariumgue_barium Posts: 5,515
    justam wrote:
    It's an interesting little story.

    There musta been something about the last guy that was different. I wonder what it was?

    He's the guy who thinks all chicks are sluts.
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  • deadnothingbetterdeadnothingbetter Posts: 2,202
    gue_barium wrote:
    He's the guy who thinks all chicks are sluts.
    or the guy with the big umm.... nevermind. i'm such a little devil. ;)
    This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    gue_barium wrote:
    He's the guy who thinks all chicks are sluts.

    That's what it seemed like to me too.
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