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A story about a girl in a corner of a street.

deadnothingbetterdeadnothingbetter Posts: 2,202
edited July 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
A guy is standing in a corner of a street. Out of nowhere a beautiful girl walks up to him and kisses him for about 30 seconds straight. She stops. Then she leaves. He is standing there wondering what the hell just happened. The next week he waits again: same time, same day and same spot. She gets there and kisses him again for 30 seconds straight. She stops. Then she leaves again without saying anything. He tells his friends about it. Just the same they all go one by one. They wait. She gets there. She kisses them. She leaves. Out of nowhere and for no reason.

Then, one particular guy goes. He waits. And waits. Finally she gets there. She stops and stares at him. She doesn't kiss him. She just stares with sadness. So he stares back with a puzzled face and flinches. He says, "hello?" She stares. And stares. And stares. So he leaves and thinks how stupid it was for him to go there. As he is leaving, she yells at him, "it's nice to finally meet you." Confused at her response, he watches intently wondering what she meant by it. She leaves. Never returns. Never kisses another man.


I am planning to write an actual short screenplay about this and form into a film... look for it soon on youtube!
This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
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Comments

  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Didn't you put this up a few months ago?
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  • deadnothingbetterdeadnothingbetter Posts: 2,202
    ummmmm............ i did? interesting.
    This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    deadnothingbetter wrote:
    ummmmm............ i did? interesting.

    Well, I read it here a while ago so I assume it was you.
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  • deadnothingbetterdeadnothingbetter Posts: 2,202
    justam wrote:
    Well, I read it here a while ago so I assume it was you.
    well, if you read it then yes it was me. but nothing wrong with posting it again! :D
    This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    deadnothingbetter wrote:
    well, if you read it then yes it was me. but nothing wrong with posting it again! :D

    :)
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  • electronblueelectronblue WPB Florida Posts: 3,460
    justam wrote:
    :)





    LOL justam...~

    :D
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    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


  • who_doesnt_like_pjwho_doesnt_like_pj Posts: 73
    i dont get it lol
    www.myspace.com/saveyou23
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