New song: What Our Seed Will Bring

FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
edited August 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I wrote and recorded this home demo, yesterday. It's the current video screen link in my myspace music page, so click that to hear it:

http://www.myspace.com/finsburytunes


And here are the lyrics:


What Our Seed Will Bring

See the beggars climb a mountain lined with dust,
their rags weighed down by stones, their hearts weighed down by trust.
How they climb, to view the rubies and the pearls
vowed by a half-blind king.

Hear each beggar blow a horn faint as a ghost
moaning in the sands where venturers are lost.
How they sound alone, like a nightbird when it swirls,
weak with a half-torn wing.

Taste the burning sky that stings the eyes
of all the sightless wretches as they flail.
Smell the slow decay, where each man dies
alive, along a sightless, lightless trail.

Touch their tattered hands, lead them down again,
down to common lands, by river, verge and plain.
How this river heals! How one’s view once more unfurls:
See what our seed can bring,
free from the king?
See what our seed can bring?
See everything.
See what our seed can bring.
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Comments

  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    I'm not able to hear your songs, but the lyrics are great! What type of seeds are they - wheat? If they are the seeds of a plant than the ending is more hopeful then if they are the "seeds" of man, which would predict doom, eh? I'm thinking it's more a plant seed as the river is positive.

    On a different subject
    Recently, I was thinking about that lighthouse ditty we created :D
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