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Ninnygo (Julie Doll)

FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
(1)

Would you like to steal
a self for yourself
so you could feel real?....

there's not enough daylight....
I may as well sleep....
You can take what you like....
I don't mind.

Steal ME.

Ninnygo nannygo nancing by,
Julie flies.


(2)

I could be that window;
I'll be any light that you keep in your room....

I know I'm dead now....
I may as well live...
Waterfall in the sun....
There's no mind.

Still ME?

Ninnygo nannygo nancing by
Julie flies.

(3)

Whose is this body?
Nothing that made me can show who I am....

You've my brains in your body....
I might as well copy
All that you say so I know it's my mind....

Do you love me?

Ninnygo nannygo nancing by
Ninnygo nannygo nancing by
Ninnygo nannygo nancing by
Ninnygo nannygo nancing by.

(This is a song I wrote awhile ago but I thought I'd post it up for the hell of it!)
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  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    I'd like to hear it in musical form.

    As it is, I really liked what you put in "poetry" form there. A little different than what I'm used to.

    Word. Bring me more!
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  • dyaogirldyaogirl Posts: 138
    Man of many talents...You continue to impress...
    '..... Ah! A perfect illustration of the poststructuralist paradox. Does the signifier "Merlot" correspond with the 'truth' of the bottle I polished off last night, or do we hold in our thoughts a different "signified" of bottle-of-Merlot-ness? Perhaps we're dreaming of the same bottle!" -FinsburyParkCarrots

  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    I'll see what I can do.

    I made a CD about five years ago, called "Crinnish". I gave away the copies I didn't sell, including my own! A mate of mine is the engineer who recorded it (in this little audio-visual studio around the corner from here); he might have the original floppy disk or whatever it was recorded on.
    I'll see what I can do.... (it might even involve being very friendly to a now- married ex-girlfriend who has a copy, to secure a temporary loan of the CD!). And if I get it sorted out, I'll try and sort it out so it's freely accessible to you via streaming (I don't know how that works as of yet, but I'll work it out......)

    The music for Ninnygo centres around a guitar tuned sometimes to DADGAD, sometimes to DADEAD, with the capo on the second fret; but it's in a modal B.....
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    cooked or raw
    makes no difference at all.
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    I've still got the carrot Ed threw at me. I sprayed it with fixative. It will be eleven in July.
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