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incline

FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
incline your breath, your stretched-out mouth again
into the dreampool shoulder-hollow; learn
to coax new honey words, lent from above,
into the godland of a woman's love
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  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Ya know what I like about your stuff......
    it's short.
    Ya know what else I like about your stuff......
    it's good.

    ps
    I was doing incline bench presses last night, so I guess my breath was inclined, too.
  • GouletGoulet Posts: 918
    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Ya know what I like about your stuff......
    it's short.
    Ya know what else I like about your stuff......
    it's good.

    ps
    I was doing incline bench presses last night, so I guess my breath was inclined, too.

    i like to do Bench Press before a Big Date
    so that my muscles are a little bigger
    and my brain is a little smaller
    and also i'm drunk
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    this is very nice :)
    It's all yellow.


  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    very nice :)
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    I really like the ending...good read. :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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