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Ophelia's Nun

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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Now, back to the present: it's for a young lady who had a little cold the other day.

    :)

    Wiley had a little cough,
    It wriggled and it tickled.
    She said, "Oh Mom, I'm feelin' rough!
    I'd like my tonsils pickled!"
    Mommy cuddled her all day
    and played her Eddie Vedder
    and Wiley was soon heard to say,
    "I'm feelin' so much better!"

    Who says, I don't do "soppy"?

    :D
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    dreamncolordreamncolor Posts: 380
    wow - finsbury - you ARE most *impressive*. lol. :D
    i'll ride the wave where it takes me
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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Yup. "Big thread......" er... :D

    Anyway, enough of that! Thanks for coming on! :)
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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    (Er... for anyone reading this next week, that's a reference to another thread and its discussion of guys with big poetry threads! LOL!) :D
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    tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    and gals with big poetry threads...

    pouty beds...


    ok... sorry... i'll go now :)
    ~all is full of love~
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    dreamncolordreamncolor Posts: 380
    sorry - i just couldnt resist. i will not drag down your lovely poetry thread with smarm - no worries. well done in any case finsbury. :)
    i'll ride the wave where it takes me
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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    You couldn't bring this thread down! Thank you for coming to see it. Well, this end of it. I know it's, er, big ....

    :D
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    tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    don't ever ask a man how big anything is ;)


    liked the lyric up there, fins
    though i can imagine it might've been a mouthfull to sing...



    oh, god... i said mouthful, didn't I
    conflasticate my 2-track mind :D
    ~all is full of love~
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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    A beggar woman rams a supermarket with two mad, eyedarting, mouthfoaming dogs, half lurcher, half doberman maybe: Dogs that gnash sunfrenzied snarls, knifeshining glares and finalising snaps of smashing teeth. Her hounds back the store's two security guards into corners and she runs the length of the store, hurriedly snatching up at random orange juice, flour, batteries, disinfectant from other peoples' baskets and trolleys. But when she makes it back to the door and runs out unstopped, she halts and calls her dogs. The beasts splutter, spit, and writhe in murderous, lustful paroxysms of devouring menace, and they each climb up the quivering legs of a guard, ready to eat their flesh, and greedly eviscerate them at the slightest flinch. But they won't come back to her. She screams at them. Please! Come! A crowd gathers in the supermarket entrance, not apprehending her, just watching. The dogs are relentless. They don't even turn their heads to her. She begs someone to to call the police.
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    BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    A beggar woman rams a supermarket with two mad, eyedarting, mouthfoaming dogs, half lurcher, half doberman maybe: Dogs that gnash sunfrenzied snarls, knifeshining glares and finalising snaps of smashing teeth. Her hounds back the store's two security guards into corners and she runs the length of the store, hurriedly snatching up at random orange juice, flour, batteries, disinfectant from other peoples' baskets and trolleys. But when she makes it back to the door and runs out unstopped, she halts and calls her dogs. The beasts splutter, spit, and writhe in murderous, lustful paroxysms of devouring menace, and they each climb up the quivering legs of a guard, ready to eat their flesh, and greedly eviscerate them at the slightest flinch. But they won't come back to her. She screams at them. Please! Come! A crowd gathers in the supermarket entrance, not apprehending her, just watching. The dogs are relentless. They don't even turn their heads to her. She begs someone to to call the police.
    :eek:
    scary dogs.... I dog bit me once, since then I have utmost distrust for stray dogs, street dogs.... not lost dogs, those I love :D
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    The beggar woman wasn't concerned about the guards being attacked. She was very vocal about the fact that what bothered her was that the dogs wouldn't obey her when she told them to come to her. Having lost control of them, she wanted the police to take them. She didn't even seem to care about what happened to herself when the police arrived. Her authority had gone.
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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    He would unpick the weave's red narrative
    of his teeth-gnashing mouth; my tearing nails
    that cut his leering jowls; his eyes a live
    red death stuck in my face; my wails
    stopped by his fist inside my mouth. We'll now
    make flame of that dark act, dear Procne; Yes,
    you have read my tapestry; we'll show
    In newfound song how brother Tereus
    defiled me, then knife-sliced my tongue clean out
    back to the bloodied roots. We'll feed his son
    Itys to him, cooked on his plate, each gout
    of his own lifeblood greedily drunk down.
    The gods will make us birds to sing our tale.
    You, a swallow. I, a nightingale.
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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Anyone not familiar with the old story of Philomel should consult Ovid's "Metamorphoses" for further reading. The Philomel tale is one of the canonical myths of Classical civilisation. This is just my take on it.

    :)
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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I wrote this song lyric. Yup. Here's another archive one. Well, the Philomel poem was written this afternoon!

    The song is played in the DADGAD tuning, in D, if anyone's interested. It went on my little CD demo a few years back.

    "Westgate to the Grey"

    Spooning the cream from your little white bowl
    Hunched over frail in your oversize shawl
    You're glancing at me with those old prefab eyes
    As you ask about dances they're doing these days
    I don't know:
    From Westgate to the Grey
    I only know what you play
    I only see what you show

    Glottal stop: headbowed: weighing the air
    And making me squint through the weight of your stare:
    You've got down the timing: you're making the play
    and giving me room so I know what to say
    But I don't know:
    From Westgate to the Grey
    I only know what you play
    I only see what you show

    Fireworks: kids on the pavement outside:
    I can't drink this coffee (That's a face I've to hide):
    Five day return and it's too late to ride:
    You ask me to stay and there's those friends I've defied
    I DON'T KNOW
    From Westgate to the Grey
    I only know what you play.
    I only see what you show.
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    tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    He would unpick the weave's red narrative
    of his teeth-gnashing mouth; my tearing nails
    that cut his leering jowls; his eyes a live
    red death stuck in my face; my wails
    stopped by his fist inside my mouth. We'll now
    make flame of that dark act, dear Procne; Yes,
    you have read my tapestry; we'll show
    In newfound song how brother Tereus
    defiled me, then knife-sliced my tongue clean out
    back to the bloodied roots. We'll feed his son
    Itys to him, cooked on his plate, each gout
    of his own lifeblood greedily drunk down.
    The gods will make us birds to sing our tale.
    You, a swallow. I, a nightingale.
    phantasmagorical

    :)
    ~all is full of love~
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    FunkeRFunkeR Posts: 105
    This is a big thread.


    What's it about?
    I say what I want, when I want. It's freedom of fucking speech.

    Sperm, It's in you to give.




    I used to have something to say... now I'm just a caricature of who I was... it's sad, that the one piece of me I wanted for you, is nothing but a misrepresentation of everything I am.
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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by tenaciousA
    phantasmagorical

    :)

    Thanks, TenA. That was this afternoon's effort! By the way, I got to the library this evening, to a nice secluded spot at the back of the study area, but someone behind me was eating out of a series of enormous packets of those Dorito-like thingies, and these bloody things stank, and all I could hear was this crunch crunch munch chew crunch crackle kapow crunch etc, as if the bloke was eating coal for his lunch. After an hour of listening to and smelling every rotten flavour of these things under the sun getting mashed and crunched, I turned around to tell this personage to shut the fakk up ... but it was the librarian on their tea break. Corruption at the heart of power, eh? Well, I came home, to see you all.

    :)
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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by FunkeR
    This is a big thread.


    What's it about?

    The big R. The jaded attempt at laconism. What is that about?
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    FunkeRFunkeR Posts: 105
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    The big R. The attempt at laconism. The propensity to bore. What is that about?



    You lost me after "the".
    I say what I want, when I want. It's freedom of fucking speech.

    Sperm, It's in you to give.




    I used to have something to say... now I'm just a caricature of who I was... it's sad, that the one piece of me I wanted for you, is nothing but a misrepresentation of everything I am.
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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by FunkeR
    You lost me after "the".

    Good.

    :)
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    tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    laconism = Terseness or succinctness of style or expression.


    as per websters.com

    terse = Brief and to the point; effectively concise
    ~all is full of love~
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    tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    Thanks, TenA. That was this afternoon's effort! By the way, I got to the library this evening, to a nice secluded spot at the back of the study area, but someone behind me was eating out of a series of enormous packets of those Dorito-like thingies, and these bloody things stank, and all I could hear was this crunch crunch munch chew crunch crackle kapow crunch etc, as if the bloke was eating coal for his lunch. After an hour of listening to and smelling every rotten flavour of these things under the sun getting mashed and crunched, I turned around to tell this personage to shut the fakk up ... but it was the librarian on their tea break. Corruption at the heart of power, eh? Well, I came home, to see you all.

    :)


    she's prolly on a low carb diet
    and eating pork rinds

    PUKE!
    ~all is full of love~
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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    It was a bloke. But yes, as I escaped the library I considered there were further horrors alive and ready to leap out of his tupperware box....

    Dang-dang-DAAAAAANGGG!!!!!!!!!!

    :D:D:D
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    tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    so, wait a sec...

    you guys LET men run libraries over there?




    wtfiuwt???



    :D
    ~all is full of love~
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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    He had a brick head, it was bald, it was dented.
    He dared you to hit it, you even consented.
    His forehead was furrowed, not by indecision
    But by a big boot from a warden, in prison.

    His nose spread flat out, like a steak in the butchers.
    His cheek was knife-scarred; it had never had stiches.
    His neck was all scrawny, tattooed with a spider.
    His unknuckled hands gripped a can of warm cider.

    He sat on the bench by the bridge on the river.
    He liked to get students with lobs of saliva.
    He'd stay, shouting out at the thick riverflow, or
    grey- dappling rainclouds. "Whaddoo I know, uh?"

    He looked like Montaigne in that funny old painting.
    Sometimes, if you heard past the raving and ranting
    He'd roar from his bench with his can or his bottle,
    He was that philosopher, going full throttle.

    There's cider unbought in the store's frosty cooler.
    The bench has been claimed by a lesser old drooler.
    The students aren't gobbed on, the river runs faster
    Perhaps there's some spirit there, giving it lustre.
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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Do you wake? Do you blink? Do you stretch in arousal?
    Draw back the curtains? Give light good perusal?
    Head for the kitchen? Yawn loudly? Feel lino
    beneath your cold feet? Take the bottle of vino
    you finished last night, to line up in the passage
    outside the back door? Fry bacon and sausage?
    Make tea with the teabag left in for good measure?
    Are you feeling your belly warmed up with good pleasure?

    Or do you survive in some deep inner cosmos,
    That doesn't have turkey and pudding at Christmas,
    or bathrooms, or clippers for toenails, or Colgate?
    Are you Ideal Text and are we just the Vulgate?
    I reckon you could yet consider the priesthood,
    As Jupiter's Priestess, of course, for you sure would
    need to be different. Well, You join the Deep Thinkers.
    I'll eat my breakfast and laugh at your blinkers.
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    tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    jupiter's priestess...

    nice :)
    ~all is full of love~
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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    If this thread was Elvis
    would it be that Fat 'n' Sweaty Guy,
    or more that Aloha from Hawaii Fella,
    ridin' the galactic telecast,
    all Proud Mary and flares
    before the cheeseburgers kicked
    into play?

    :D
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    tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    hard to say
    you know, elvis was
    a constant work of progress :D


    viva la finsbury
    ~all is full of love~
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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Shouldn't it be "le finsbury"?
    From Las Finsos ...

    :D

    Las Finsos basement ...
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