Ophelia's Nun
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A square ditch festers on the playing green.
Steel cold. Jagged as hard throat wire.
No, do not be thrown down. What had been
the game of angels ended in that mire.0 -
"You need to edit your writing;
It's long and cumbersome;
The style's just not inviting:
In fact it's slumbersome.
You're quite the Malaprop, you know:
Big words, all misapplied.
From one mistake more errors grow,
and well, my patience died,
I would say, about line three.
To get THERE was a push.
Good prose, when choice, is clear to see
and feel. It's bright, it's lush:
It shows the writer's mind in flight,
not just a clumsy pride.
Try and make your vision bright:
Now, look up ... Open wide...."0 -
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Thank you for your poem.0
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how about lurking, fins? you wouldn't know anything about that, would you?0
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Pasta asked me a couple of times to come and read her poems. That's not lurking. That's reading. The phrase "lurking" lacks an objective correlative when spoken in this context; it implies that the speaker's state of mind is in excess of facts as they are. (Read TS Eliot on "Hamlet". Better still, read "Hamlet".)
Do people lurk in Public Libraries when they go to read books? The acquisition of knowledge by reading is greatly sullied when claimed to be a voyeuristic pursuit. If you see a reader as a voyeur, then you must perceive your own writing as squallid: The logic is relentless.
People have the self esteem to respond in the face of adversity with gentility and kindness, though a cruder sensibility would misread such magnanimity as ego. The one word cry of ego against a person generous with words is as an admission of impotent ego in oneself, a projective misidentification. Let the call of "ego" come and fall upon the speaker of that word.
"The worst are full of passionate intensity."
WB Yeats0 -
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This is about a love for a band that inspires us to new and creative heights! And it’s about sharing the beautiful creative energy that has gone into this thread's creation! Let’s get back to the basics and share our art, our creativity! So, poetry, writing and prose please!
Thanks,
dyaogirl'..... Ah! A perfect illustration of the poststructuralist paradox. Does the signifier "Merlot" correspond with the 'truth' of the bottle I polished off last night, or do we hold in our thoughts a different "signified" of bottle-of-Merlot-ness? Perhaps we're dreaming of the same bottle!" -FinsburyParkCarrots0 -
No, no, It's not ego on my part. Ego motivates destructive behaviour. I set up exercises for other people to excel, and they, not I, produced the best work on this thread, perhaps on this forum. I'm proud of everybody here who makes an effort to effect positivity through creativity.
It's great to have good friends whose talent and goodwill continues to move and amaze me!0 -
Ophelia's Nun is a wonderful place to share and grow. It has flourished under the gentle guidance of its starter. It's been a learning experience for us all. So many people have shared in it's creation, it has a beauty and life of it’s own. It seems unfair for the people who have contributed to its energy and the ones who have yet to read it to have it silenced. I come back time and time again to read the joy and the energy that is what we call Ophelia’s Nun.'..... Ah! A perfect illustration of the poststructuralist paradox. Does the signifier "Merlot" correspond with the 'truth' of the bottle I polished off last night, or do we hold in our thoughts a different "signified" of bottle-of-Merlot-ness? Perhaps we're dreaming of the same bottle!" -FinsburyParkCarrots0
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Thank you, olderman, for your PM of support, by the way.0
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The blackthorn hangs, the sparrow calls.
the autumn takes to wind.
The blackthorn rises; look what falls.
A summer's blaze. Behind
my lidding eyes, the memory
of growth will build again.
Let them fall, leaves, tears, awry:
My love's my store and gain.0 -
He sits writing his words
And sometimes, I'm certain, he's standing...
When a curious mix of delightful words
into his head they are landing
And his joy at the words
he cannot contain
nor refrain from sharing with others
For the man is a wordsmith,
that's his trade don't you know?
Would it satisfy if he kept to himself?
Nay, for only a fool would expect
that a tradesman would store
his glorious life work on a shelf!0 -
Thank you, ruby.0
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You're most welcome. (I meant every word. You are truly a delight.)0
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Thank you.0
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Originally posted by ruby
He sits writing his words
And sometimes, I'm certain, he's standing...
When a curious mix of delightful words
into his head they are landing
And his joy at the words
he cannot contain
nor refrain from sharing with others
For the man is a wordsmith,
that's his trade don't you know?
Would it satisfy if he kept to himself?
Nay, for only a fool would expect
that a tradesman would store
his glorious life work on a shelf!
Yaaay! Ruby!
Yes! This is the way most of us on the board truly feel!
Thank you Ruby for expressing it so eloquently!'..... Ah! A perfect illustration of the poststructuralist paradox. Does the signifier "Merlot" correspond with the 'truth' of the bottle I polished off last night, or do we hold in our thoughts a different "signified" of bottle-of-Merlot-ness? Perhaps we're dreaming of the same bottle!" -FinsburyParkCarrots0
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