Ophelia's Nun

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  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Bee Eee girl, you're gonna fly
    on a honey glade green in the blue of July
    With the buzz of a happy heart loving like new
    And the gleams of the river a-sparkle for you

    Bee Eee girl
    You're our girl
    Bee Eee girl
    You're our girl

    :)
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Hired bikes careen down King's Parade
    in eights and nines; and parties block the path
    to pose for photos. When I try to wade
    through this, I walk ellipses. I hear Plath
    and Marlowe mentioned by one group. I hear
    a reference to Ventris. Tourist guides
    and chauffeur punts approach and wave me near,
    But I've grown up with Cambridge river rides.

    I've grown up with Cambridge river rides,
    that's true, but what I share with those who come
    from elsewhere is how this old city glides
    above our hearts, not touching, never home.
    We walk along pretend peripheries,
    Negotiating faceless histories.
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    A: There comes a time when breath feels like your own,
    though once, you had to fight to take it down;
    There comes a time to say that you have grown
    full out of snarl of lip and brow in frown;
    There comes a time when all your thought and mood
    wants sound that's soft: a wind that sings in grass;
    There comes a time, no more to stoop and brood.
    There comes a time to let the bad years pass.

    B: There is a neverending and a gasp
    you hope's the last, but still you carry on
    waiting for the rattle and the rasp
    of death. I need the glare of desert sun
    upon my broken flesh, where vicious flies
    gorge. 'There comes a time?'. No, That's just lies.
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    This is a song lyric of mine from some years back. The narrator could be one of many people I've met in my lifetime:



    Would you like to steal a self for yourself so you could feel real?
    There's not enough daylight; I may as well sleep;
    You can take what you like, I don't mind. Steal me.
    Ninnygo nannygo nancing by: see me fly.

    I could be that window; I'll be any light that you keep in your room.
    I know I'm dead now; I may as well live;
    Waterfall in the sun, there's no mind. Still me?
    Ninnygo nannygo nancing by: see me fly.

    Whose is this body? Nothing that made me can show who I am.
    You've my brains in your body; I might as well copy
    All that you say so I know it's my mind: Do you love me?

    Ninnygo nannygo nancing by,
    Ninnygo nannygo nancing by,
    Ninnygo nannygo nancing by,
    Ninnygo nannygo nancing by.
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    His thick white hair, an old king's, will be mine one day,
    as will the long head,
    the whiskers brushed with a comb,
    or the cataracted eyes
    that saw the important corners of others' stealth.

    Grandad sat on his wooden chair
    under the back window,
    beside the open stove.

    He had a 'thirties box wireless on top of the press
    next to him,
    and used his finger sense to work the dials
    to find the News.
    I saw him use a hanky on his face,
    shaking his head to news of another Nothern bombing.

    When he died his coffin was six foot six
    and the Boys wanted to come down from Antrim
    and fire shots over him, their hero.
    They were turned away
    at the dying wish of an old man
    cataracted by decades of seeing too much.

    Grandad told me, his Little Patriot
    that the art of a true guerrilla
    was to save the sight best
    that will see around the corners
    always

    maybe into a peace.
  • jboelhow
    jboelhow Posts: 170
    Great Stuff,
    I am slowly getting through all these poems, FinsburyParkCarrots. Your words create wonderful images in the mind and the heart....
    Live the life you dream

    "Cause I can't wait to figure out what's wrong with me
    So I can say this is the way I use to be" -- John Mayer
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by jboelhow
    Great Stuff,
    I am slowly getting through all these poems, FinsburyParkCarrots. Your words create wonderful images in the mind and the heart....

    Thank you very much.

    :)
  • exhale
    exhale Posts: 185
    I turned this morning to this thread,
    To inhale the words, to walk few steps
    Down the line of the magnificent expressions,
    This is a hard day, I need some inspiration.

    In an hour, maybe two,
    They´ll invite me in and say: ´We don´t know you
    yet. Please, introduce yourself.´
    I am scared, and I need help...
    Write. Wind each new thought upon the stream;
    and in its contradiction of response,
    Or seeming stagnance, see that rippled gleam
    That might suggest true movement. If you sense
    a hidden wave in what seems blanket still,
    Write more, wind each desire, and you'll see
    The willows nod and rustle, and you will
    hear the rushing babble of the free
    gush of water, brimming, charged with light
    That is your reader's understanding heart.
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Never regret posting your poetry. Good luck in all your exams this week.

    :)
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    John, sitting in the lecture theatre with a shuffling, coughing class, thought it best to be patient. The lecturer was sidetracked near the end of the hour on The Waste Land, going on about the Osiris myth and Frazer's Golden Bough, at one point bringing in her own botanical observations and even recommending listening to Gardeners' Question Time on Radio Four. Well, in fairness to her, he mused, she had given some useful pointers to essays on the modern metropolis earlier. Yes, we must learn the diligence of monks in this academic world. John angled his open folder up, that had been covering his lap, towards him and saw handwriting, not his, on his page.

    The pub after this?

    He turned to his right and Nicola, sitting beside him and whose name he knew by the name tag on her breast, was looking deeply upon his lips, her bright blue eyes like globes of luscious sky. He noted the curl of her golden hair on her freckled cheek, the hint of a black silky brastrap on her sunbrowned shoulder under her top, and the soft deliberate stroke of her fingertips, along her khaki pants. Her light breath on his cheek sang low, Kiss these full quivering lips, now. His eyes focused on the lips, suddenly the centre of a delicious universe to be explored, enjoyed, tasted and indulged in protracted breathless headspinning starlight ecstacy. They mouthed, Kiss me, kiss me, and he was knowing he was moving, deeper, deeper, deeper into an exquisite dreampool honey dance of electric Nicola-ness, and he closed his eyes and, in that first pulsing shiver of lips seeking lips and desires plunging into oceans of response and touch and oneness of moment, a thunderclap roared upon the glass dome of the lecture hall, that desert of bookish knowledge, and discovering the sudden loveliness of love's surprise in the cloisters of learning, new and lively roots grew again in summer rain, without any help from Gardeners' Question Time.
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Cloudflock, rainwinged,
    preys upon a drenched head,
    white, beaten, bowing

    eyeless to the grass.
    The black Dover sky beats down
    babefed cormorants,

    bloodmouthing thunder
    flashes, over blind Gloucester
    praying to bad gods.

    The old man drops down
    the imagined cliff fall,
    cloudbirds screaming spoil;

    Waking to flat land,
    into tragedy's comfort,
    sunny meadowed.
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I see the down upon your arm,
    and taste the gem of glycerin.
    I feel your body rising, warm:
    I move within.

    I sense the rise of breath that moves
    each skying wave azureward now
    beyond the oldest joys and loves:
    O deepest flow!
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    "Hey Junior, I've made these wings, resistant to the sun",
    Cried Dedalus, who ran in rings, with all his hard work done.
    "Hey Junior! Come try these on; I'll make you a propeller!",
    The artificer bellowed: an enthusiastic fella.

    "Ahh man, who wants those wings to fly? Get with the moment, dude!
    You get up in those things and die, their structure's way too crude,
    And you'll be flapping, dead, locked in the harness of the wind,
    When you could be space-zapping, without gadgets of that kind."

    Dedalus knelt down upon the ground, his head in hand.
    "Oh, so's the way I've found, that you will never understand,
    Your wingless claims to king the air can never come to pass
    Because you don't go anywhere; you sit upon your arse."
  • anOmis
    anOmis Posts: 223
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    "Hey Junior, I've made these wings, resistant to the sun",
    Cried Dedalus, who ran in rings, with all his hard work done.
    "Hey Junior! Come try these on; I'll make you a propeller!",
    The artificer bellowed: an enthusiastic fella.

    "Ahh man, who wants those wings to fly? Get with the moment, dude!
    You get up in those things and die, their structure's way too crude,
    And you'll be flapping, dead, locked in the harness of the wind,
    When you could be space-zapping, without gadgets of that kind."

    Dedalus knelt down upon the ground, his head in hand.
    "Oh, so's the way I've found, that you will never understand,
    Your wingless claims to king the air can never come to pass
    Because you don't go anywhere; you sit upon your arse."

    thats brilliant FPC.

    amasing writting..love poems inpisred of mytholohy!
    love chasing the sun
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Twas all the case for Icarus
    His father bode him not to trust
    The structure of a wing in wax
    nor his own adolescent lust.

    And still, he donned this fabrication
    come to trust as he did fly
    toward an ever-bright horizon
    toward the stars beyond the sky.

    Every Maiden fan does know
    the edging of this story’s haze
    Icarus’ wings turned to ashes
    The lack of which to him his grave

    What’s often left but yet unmentioned
    Daedelus’ instruction biding
    “Icarus, don’t fly too low, Son
    lest ye be washed up in the tiding.”

    And so the fabled fables blow
    all the smoke up all the asses
    quite cliched and unamazing
    FLIGHT is oft slow like Molasses.


    “Slow down, you move too fast, You got to make the morning last, just, skipping down the cobble stones… doo-n-de-doo and Feeling Groovy”
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    The point is that we keep trying to fly by improving our means of transportation.

    No, I'm not an Iron Maiden fan.
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    the point is
    is that we do what we can
    what suits us
    each
    personally
    that we seek to fly
    in the vehicle of our own choosing
    and deal with whatever turbulence we might make along the way
    and learn
    and change
    if we're uncomfortable
    and if not
    then why would we?
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    the point is
    is that we do what we can
    what suits us
    each
    personally
    that we seek to fly
    in the vehicle of our own choosing
    and deal with whatever turbulence we might make along the way
    and learn
    and change
    if we're uncomfortable
    and if not
    then why would we?

    Indeed. My poem's about a person who thinks they can fly without trying to get up off their chair.
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    But I'll let cassia have the last word here. She emails me and says,

    Better kingless on his ass
    than kissing the ground
    in a pool of melted wax.

    :-)

    Dat cass. :D
  • exhale
    exhale Posts: 185
    are these words from Pasta I can read here?
    :D
    Write. Wind each new thought upon the stream;
    and in its contradiction of response,
    Or seeming stagnance, see that rippled gleam
    That might suggest true movement. If you sense
    a hidden wave in what seems blanket still,
    Write more, wind each desire, and you'll see
    The willows nod and rustle, and you will
    hear the rushing babble of the free
    gush of water, brimming, charged with light
    That is your reader's understanding heart.