Kingfisher

FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
edited March 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I move through Hobson's Brook in my waders, with my fork
angled down in a fast jut-thrust.
I lift out a cake of green cress
up and out from the mud, and I love the suck it makes
and the feel of the weight on the metal
and the way the water jets through the prongs
escaping back noisy, sploshing back into the stream.
I flick the fork into the air from the elbows,
How Dad showed me, and three stones of cress fire up
over my head ... wheeeee ..... to land on the top of the bank
five feet away. It's great to keep repeating this, keep repeating this,
moving my rubber-booted feet through friendly sludge,
watching the deeps always near a tree coming from the verge,
with the spring sun spying proudly through willow fronds
and lighting the sound of a splosh in my busying mind.
And oh, the voles and moorhens and the drakes love to see the river clear:
they bomb past me merrily, their little bottoms nuzzling into new terrain;
a grasssnake whips between my booted calves in the roll downstream,
and if it could say "Excuse me there, kind fella", you know, I think it would.
But what makes me stop and watch and listen
Right now
in the boughs of that cypress
just there
is
that kingfisher
its little heart beating
in a shiny orange breast
its jacket blue
its beak grinning
its toes curled
its eyes on me
gosh
even the water stills now...
Hey, kingfisher...
What would you like me to do
with the river?

:)
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  • Gulls in twos
    like honest magpies,
    they mean joy, for sure,
    their headfirst trajectories
    figure eights, elliptical orbits,
    gliding, dipping,
    rising, zipping into poplars,
    popping out fast
    against this
    light blue
    Cambridge
    afternoon.
    Joy in twos.
  • dyaogirldyaogirl Posts: 138
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    I move through Hobson's Brook in my waders, with my fork
    angled down in a fast jut-thrust.
    I lift out a cake of green cress
    up and out from the mud, and I love the suck it makes
    and the feel of the weight on the metal
    and the way the water jets through the prongs
    escaping back noisy, sploshing back into the stream.
    I flick the fork into the air from the elbows,
    How Dad showed me, and three stones of cress fire up
    over my head ... wheeeee ..... to land on the top of the bank
    five feet away. It's great to keep repeating this, keep repeating this,
    moving my rubber-booted feet through friendly sludge,
    watching the deeps always near a tree coming from the verge,
    with the spring sun spying proudly through willow fronds
    and lighting the sound of a splosh in my busying mind.
    And oh, the voles and moorhens and the drakes love to see the river clear:
    they bomb past me merrily, their little bottoms nuzzling into new terrain;
    a grasssnake whips between my booted calves in the roll downstream,
    and if it could say "Excuse me there, kind fella", you know, I think it would.
    But what makes me stop and watch and listen
    Right now
    in the boughs of that cypress
    just there
    is
    that kingfisher
    its little heart beating
    in a shiny orange breast
    its jacket blue
    its beak grinning
    its toes curled
    its eyes on me
    gosh
    even the water stills now...
    Hey, kingfisher...
    What would you like me to do
    with the river?

    :)

    In silent energy from Precambrian ages
    Historical imprints on time-layered mud banks
    Chronicles Pangaea’s current
    Absorbing all pre-moments
    To become this silent instance of grandeur
    Today!
    You!
    Are part of it’s history
    It’s life, it’s future, it’s flow….

    Now! Go! paddle down and see what’s at the end! :)
    '..... Ah! A perfect illustration of the poststructuralist paradox. Does the signifier "Merlot" correspond with the 'truth' of the bottle I polished off last night, or do we hold in our thoughts a different "signified" of bottle-of-Merlot-ness? Perhaps we're dreaming of the same bottle!" -FinsburyParkCarrots

  • Originally posted by dyaogirl
    In silent energy from Precambrian ages
    Historical imprints on time-layered mud banks
    Chronicles Pangaea’s current
    Absorbing all pre-moments
    To become this silent instance of grandeur
    Today!
    You!
    Are part of it’s history
    It’s life, it’s future, it’s flow….

    Now! Go! paddle down and see what’s at the end! :)

    :) Thank you, my love.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    delightful as usual, fins :)
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