Totem pole

FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
edited April 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Wade water
Fork cress
Throw spoil
Push through
Reach out
Touch bank
Taste berries
Wipe Sweat
Climb verge
Dodge wasps
Stand still
Shake waders
Breathe in
Taste morning
Breathe out
Smile wide
Plod back
Reach van
Open door
Get sandwiches
Pour tea
Peruse paper
Curse Bush
Love life
Totemise experience.
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  • Rainsplashed windowpane
    Royalblue predawn
    Pavement wetglazed
    Birchtree sparrowweighted
    Boughbrown windwaving
    Gardenhedge diagonalbobbing
    telephonewire trapezeyanking
    Aprilneither springsummer
    Electropulsing morning
    Electropulsing morning now
    Electropulsing growing dawning
    now and now and now and now
    electropulsing shooting green in blue
    in blooming tulip wetskin dripping
    open garden greening budding joy just joy just
    now with the red show in the sky
    and the bleed of gold and the end of the shower
    and the rising of stems and the reaching out of birches
    and love is all and it's all and it's all you'll ever be able
    really ever
    ever ever
    to feel
    oh feel it
    yes feel it
    oh feel it
    yes be it
    yes be.
    Yes. Be.

    :)
  • Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    Wade water
    Fork cress
    Throw spoil
    Push through
    Reach out
    Touch bank
    Taste berries
    Wipe Sweat
    Climb verge
    Dodge wasps
    Stand still
    Shake waders
    Breathe in
    Taste morning
    Breathe out
    Smile wide
    Plod back
    Reach van
    Open door
    Get sandwiches
    Pour tea
    Peruse paper
    Curse Bush
    Love life
    Totemise experience.
    how wonderful!!!
    dont know if there is a hiearchy
    but everything is blended so wonderfull and truthfully
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    Rainsplashed windowpane
    Royalblue predawn
    Pavement wetglazed
    Birchtree sparrowweighted
    Boughbrown windwaving
    Gardenhedge diagonalbobbing
    telephonewire trapezeyanking
    Aprilneither springsummer
    Electropulsing morning
    Electropulsing morning now
    Electropulsing growing dawning
    now and now and now and now
    electropulsing shooting green in blue
    in blooming tulip wetskin dripping
    open garden greening budding joy just joy just
    now with the red show in the sky
    and the bleed of gold and the end of the shower
    and the rising of stems and the reaching out of birches
    and love is all and it's all and it's all you'll ever be able
    really ever
    ever ever
    to feel
    oh feel it
    yes feel it
    oh feel it
    yes be it
    yes be.
    Yes. Be.

    :)

    i think the reader needs to bring thier shades and an appetite
    yummy for my tummy :D
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    here here!

    these are absolutely delightful :D


    cudos to you :D:D:D
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    fins is one poetic mo fo

    *cheers to the fins*
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    we can just coin a word here...

    pomofo



    i think that rocks :D
  • Originally posted by PastaNazi
    we can just coin a word here...

    pomofo



    i think that rocks :D

    That'd
    also
    relate
    to the
    totem
    pole
    theme.
    Since
    the
    Pomo
    tribe
    inhabited
    Northern
    California,
    and
    'fo'
    is
    an
    archaic
    variant
    of
    'few',
    that
    would
    mean
    that
    I
    am
    an
    assembly
    of
    good
    fine
    proud
    Native
    American
    people.
    And
    there's
    always
    strength
    in numbers! :)
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