And another new song...

FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
edited January 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Wrote this one today. The chords are all done, too. I'll do a demo soon:

"Lucella Beaucoup"

Lucella Beaucoup
Makes a world of her mind, not as others do:
A grey cloudy day becomes Baldy San Gabriel Blue.

Bougainvillea gold
Echoes bright Pasadena, a valley of old:
A wild Santa Ana’s a clown, with a comical frown.

And Lucella will sing,
Then sundogs will rise like a roar.
An ocean will ring
Dophins, in call, slow and pure.

Lucella Beaucoup
Holds a apple so green: in her touch, in her view,
Its sphere is the globe of our dance, into love, into blue.

And a whitewhisper fold
Of a butterfly breeze is a legend untold:
A wild Santa Ana’s made king, from the tiniest wing.

And Lucella will sing,
Then mountainstar comets will soar.
Their reeling will ring
The Om of the earth, of our core.

And Lucella will sing,
Then roses will wash on the shore.
A magic will ring
Arcadian secrets and lore.
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    It's still called Lucella Beaucoup, but I found that singing Lucella Beaucoup sounds crap! So....

    Lucella Theroux
    Makes a world of her mind, not as others do:
    A grey cloudy day becomes Baldy San Gabriel Blue.

    Bougainvillea gold
    Echoes bright Pasadena, a valley of old:
    A wild Santa Ana’s a clown, with a comical frown.

    And Lucella will sing,
    Then sundogs will rise like a roar.
    An ocean will ring
    Dophins, in call, slow and pure.

    Lucella Theroux
    Holds an apple so green: in her touch, in her view,
    Its sphere is the globe of our dance, into love, into blue.

    And a whitewhisper fold
    Of a butterfly breeze is a legend untold:
    A wild Santa Ana’s made king, from the tiniest wing.

    And Lucella will sing,
    Then mountainstar comets will soar.
    Their reeling will ring
    The Om of the earth, of our core.

    And Lucella will sing,
    Then roses will wash on the shore.
    A magic will ring
    Arcadian secrets and lore.
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    For the title, Beaucoup or Theroux? You decide.... :) Both make an ooo sound!
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    merci, beaucoups!

    did you spell arcadia correctly? greece? or did you mean to spell acadia as in french canadian?

    good stuff fins, as always. :D
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I did it the Californian way, as a tribute to cassia. :)
  • A regular Van Morrison we have on this board.

    Awesome! :)
    All I know is that to see, and not to speak, would be the great betrayal.
    -Enoch Powell
  • gue_bariumgue_barium Posts: 5,515
    It's still called Lucella Beaucoup, but I found that singing Lucella Beaucoup sounds crap! So....

    Lucella Theroux
    Makes a world of her mind, not as others do:
    A grey cloudy day becomes Baldy San Gabriel Blue.

    Bougainvillea gold
    Echoes bright Pasadena, a valley of old:
    A wild Santa Ana’s a clown, with a comical frown.

    And Lucella will sing,
    Then sundogs will rise like a roar.
    An ocean will ring
    Dophins, in call, slow and pure.

    Lucella Theroux
    Holds an apple so green: in her touch, in her view,
    Its sphere is the globe of our dance, into love, into blue.

    And a whitewhisper fold
    Of a butterfly breeze is a legend untold:
    A wild Santa Ana’s made king, from the tiniest wing.

    And Lucella will sing,
    Then mountainstar comets will soar.
    Their reeling will ring
    The Om of the earth, of our core.

    And Lucella will sing,
    Then roses will wash on the shore.
    A magic will ring
    Arcadian secrets and lore.

    On first read here I pronounced it Boe Coo, so Theroux is the same to me, hehee.

    When I got to the last line I sort of re-wrote it my head to read Circadian rhythms and lore...

    Not bad, though, I like it.

    Now I must go hide for questioning the master.

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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    That's alright, mate! I'll make a home demo of it, soon. :cool:
  • gue_bariumgue_barium Posts: 5,515
    That's alright, mate! I'll make a home demo of it, soon. :cool:

    I look forward to hearing it.

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  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    I really like it fin
    would love to hear the demo (if you post it!)
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
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