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In memoriam

FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
More than the sun you rose within my hand
and in your dying, heaven's light you proved,
a halo, growing to a rainbow band.
Light evermore, oh light forever loved!
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  • pearlmuttpearlmutt Posts: 392
    and on that note, adios amigos.
  • pearlmuttpearlmutt Posts: 392
    and on that note, adios amigos.
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Thankyou.

    Apparently a wish of thankyou is too short. Fuck and curse poisonously those who would argue otherwise.
  • decides2dreamdecides2dream Posts: 14,977
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    Thankyou.

    Apparently a wish of thankyou is too short. Fuck and curse poisonously those who would argue otherwise.


    now i don't know which i think more poetic. your first post, or this one. ;)
    Stay with me...
    Let's just breathe...


    I am myself like you somehow


  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I am mourning a loss.
  • decides2dreamdecides2dream Posts: 14,977
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    I am mourning a loss.


    my apologies. i didn't mean to come off as flippant about it. yes, i could see that from your first post. what a lovely testament, and again, i am sorry. :(
    Stay with me...
    Let's just breathe...


    I am myself like you somehow


  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    beautiful
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    As one who has seen many years,
    There have been, as well, many tears,
    My hope for this day,
    Is that in some small way,
    Condolences bring comfort here.

    Sorry for your loss, Richard. :(
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • electronblueelectronblue WPB Florida Posts: 3,460
    as tears go by...~
    ********************************
    "Forgive every being,
    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


  • erryerry Posts: 15
    And let the wind whispers...

    You make me feel your loss....beautiful....
    may we all stay most human and most alive
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    I feel your sorrow...this is a beautiful post...
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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