Nothing Came of November

FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
edited December 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
All of this - over red leaves not falling.
walkers too weary to call them beautiful:
All of this - chaffinches on rooftops, not yet flown
and nobody stopping to call this wonderful:
All of this nothing is November, November now.
Nothing came of November. Nothing changed, no.
Only the stupid great swell of a brookbroken flood.
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  • Shake a string of tinsel underneath
    a desklamp. See it splinter golden-lit,
    glowing strips of silver. Blow your breath
    across the room. Watch all this tinsel flit
    and spin in wheeling orbits. See it fall,
    a brittle jingling electric reel
    that merges with the carpet after all
    its little viciousness. Now, go on, kneel:

    Kneel and scratch what's lost. Dig in. Exhume
    your grave of glitter, grave of violent light.
    You shook the string, you let the ground consume
    your fire effect. You've nothing left that might
    attract eyes to your colours anymore.
    The ground has made a dullness of your store.
  • Portacabins on a building site
    of sand and ballast catch east dust. Between
    Novembered birch branches, someone's kite
    waves, a swollen flag of bruised green
    wind jabbed like a novice boxer's chin
    behind a well thrown fist. A winter sleet
    falls on a traffic jam. Now, wheels spin.
    Dust blows up leaves and papers on the street.

    Behind nice glass, I'm sheltered. Behind
    my windowpane, I look down on the sight
    of all that shuffles through my open blind;
    I write beside an artificial light:
    I'll open up my window. I will share
    the dust with you. I'll write, cold, choked, bare.
  • 'The BBC World Service, coming through
    a smallish speaker in my wireless set
    Pulses static, but within the slough
    of wow and flutter comes a jet
    of crystal tones, a voice that speaks of green
    village lawns and clocks at ten to three,
    that Englishness of "Never England". Keen
    Upholder of this dream, I shall agree

    to blank out tales of no-go grey estates
    and burnt out cars stood in poor courtyards. No,
    Forget what friends on 'phones cry of the fates
    of England's past traditions. I'm hearing long ago
    In wireless voices, clipped, without fear
    that English myths belong to yesteryear.'
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    'The BBC World Service, coming through
    a smallish speaker in my wireless set
    Pulses static, but within the slough
    of wow and flutter comes a jet
    of crystal tones, a voice that speaks of green
    village lawns and clocks at ten to three,
    that Englishness of "Never England". Keen
    Upholder of this dream, I shall agree

    to blank out tales of no-go grey estates
    and burnt out cars stood in poor courtyards. No,
    Forget what friends on 'phones cry of the fates
    of England's past traditions. I'm hearing long ago
    In wireless voices, clipped, without fear
    that English myths belong to yesteryear.'

    "burnt out cars stood in poor courtyards."

    it's the same all over, indeed..

    ty richard for 3 excellent sonnets..
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • the November one is da bomb.
    .........................................................................
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