Louis MacNeice, "Coda"

FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
Louis MacNeice was a poet, playwright, journalist and broadcaster.




Maybe we knew each other better
When the night was young and unrepeated
And the moon stood still over Jericho.

So much for the past; in the present
There are moments caught between heart-beats
When maybe we know each other better.

But what is that clinking in the darkness?
Maybe we shall know each other better
When the tunnels meet beneath the mountain.
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  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    That woman set herself on fire--
    They said it on the radio.
    They said she lit off the skies of palestine.
    I could not stand to hear them say so.

    I saw the stars come out.
    I saw the oranges on the trees.
    Later on they played some Carribean song--
    Man, they sure know how to pick 'em.

    The rich voice burning like a fuse--
    The syncopated rhythms.

    I saw the stars come out.
    I saw the oranges cracking open.
    I saw you standing there--
    Orange blossom in your hair.
    Going to palestine,
    Going to palestine.
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    the same place we go
    and find no way to see the light
    is the same faithful place of change
    when flying high covers up the night

    i wish that i could express myself
    and leave my descriptions to someone else
    and i know that one day my biggest fears
    will scare me into the hands of god
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    Fins, I just saw this while I was looking for one of Groover's old posts......this affected me so much when I lived in London - I took it so personally, that I read a book of his poetry.....
    I am not yet born; O hear me.
    Let not the bloodsucking bat or the rat or the stoat or the club-footed ghoul come near me.

    I am not yet born, console me.
    I fear that the human race may with tall walls wall me, with strong drugs dope me, with wise lies lure me, on black racks rack me, in blood-baths roll me.

    I am not yet born; provide me
    With water to dandle me, grass to grow for me, trees to talk to me, sky to sing to me, birds and a white light in the back of my mind to guide me.

    I am not yet born; forgive me
    For the sins that in me the world shall commit, my words when they speak me, my thoughts when they think me, my treason engendered by traitors beyond me, my life when they murder by means of my hands, my death when they live me.

    I am not yet born; rehearse me
    In the parts I must play and the cues I must take when old men lecture me, bureaucrats hector me, mountains frown at me, lovers laugh at me, the white waves call me to folly and the desert calls me to doom and the beggar refuses my gift and my children curse me.

    I am not yet born; O hear me,
    Let not the man who is beast or who thinks he is God come near me.

    I am not yet born; O fill me
    With strength against those who would freeze my humanity, would dragoon me into a lethal automaton, would make me a cog in a machine, a thing with one face, a thing, and against all those who would dissipate my entirety, would blow me like thistledown hither and thither or hither and thither like water held in the hands would spill me.

    Let them not make me a stone and let them not spill me.
    Otherwise kill me.

    I really felt like they had done this to me.....and that they had spillt me

    (I thought that he had prophesied about me.....I remember reading about people on the tube praying for this and that......let's have an Auden thread)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Yes, I think MacNeice was a phenomenal poet. Here's a piece he wrote about my Dad's part of the world:

    The Strand


    White Tintoretto clouds beneath my naked feet,
    This mirror of wet sand imputes a lasting mood
    To island truancies; my steps repeat

    Someone’s who now has left such strands for good
    Carrying his boots and paddling like a child,
    A square black figure whom the horizon understood -

    My father. Who for all his responsibly compiled
    Account books of a devout, precise routine
    Kept something in him solitary and wild,

    So loved the Western sea and no tree’s green
    Fulfilled him like these contours of Slievemore
    Menaun and Croghaun and the bogs between.

    Sixty-odd years behind him and twelve before,
    Eyeing the flange of steel in the turning belt of brine
    It was sixteen years ago he walked this shore

    And the mirror caught his shape which catches mine
    But then as now the floor-mop of the foam
    Blotted the bright reflections - and no sign

    Remains of face or feet when visitors have gone home.
  • An Auden thread sounds like a great idea. Maybe he was the greatest poet of the last century, maybe not. He's certainly great enough for people to read and discover.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    the place names of Ireland confuse my brain....I know the way we speak, I feel my native land in my heart......but I'm an emigrant.......and I can't go back......forever......that was a beautiful poem.....I might read a bit more of his......I'm not in the same state I was in in London, so they shouldn't be so scary anymore.......
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Thanks finns,once again.(For new introductions to new ideas)......
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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