Words Fall

FinsburyParkCarrots
FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Words fall, gull echo fog on seaweed stone,
waveroll on a sea wall. Broken words
that windrose, dream hair fronds shone
through in sun, fall. Dream winds down. Gone, words.
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  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Fall words, dreamlost, shapeless, fall below
    the nothingblue of ocean silence, dredge
    the guts of earthdeath up then toss the edge
    of madness back for me to Word, to know.
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Waveroll, break the seawall down. Split
    the golden fronds of manes of heads of men
    through with spectral glass sand magic, grit
    the seaweed stones with dirty newness, then
    shift within me echoings, gull mad
    crying ocean motherdreaming glad
    words rising, words clamouring gull glad, gull mad, null one.
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Just jamming there. Don't mind me.
  • olderman
    olderman Posts: 1,765
    gone done foiled about
    shout oiled some tripe
    cold heart steel fortunes
    a lesser brother exists nowhere...
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • PJfaninmaine
    PJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    absolutely love it! Very well done Fins!
    and you too olderman.
    Thanks
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • Righteous Jammer
    Righteous Jammer Posts: 509
    I love the ending of your poem..very nice
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    and a poem rises. :)

    "...and I hope ya like jammin'
    I hope ya like jammin'
    I wanna jam it with you" :D

    Tide breaks,
    Words fall,
    And are carried off to see.

    :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen

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