Monologue

FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
edited March 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Here -- wass...wass... your name again? Vincent? No. Richard? Richard! Richard. Risteard. Good man. Sound. Sound. Shake hands. Sound ... as... a... pound. How's Cambridge? Wayy eyee!! Eh? Waayy eyye munnn! I was in Newcastle. How's Cambridge? I... I was there. Oh, many years ago. The swingin' sixties. I was swingin' a shovel. I worked in Cambridge. Myself and Noonan. Layin' slabs we were, for months. Awkward man to work for. Great man. Sound. Sound. I fell in love there, I did. An English girl. Worked in the building society on Regent Street. See, I know. Oh, but she had lovely hair, dark. White skin so soft. Janine. We would go for dances in the Rex. Is the Rex still there? It's not? Is... is... the Rob Roy there? No, all gone. We'd go into the Rex for dances. Fridays, cheap admission. We'd go when I had my wages. I had my suit. I was good lookin'. And Janine was tall, and fine.

There was that winter and work was hard. I got in with Masterson and we had... too much of that, you know. And there was fights and, and all. It was hard for us in those days. We were the emigrants, the immigrants. We weren't nothin'. And Janine's mother, she was a widow. Kept a guest house on Tenison Road near the station, and I wasn't welcome. Janine married someone in her work. I could get work and went hard.

And ahh, Parker's Piece! Is Parker's Piece still there? Ayyee, I know. They played cricket there. Often a day I'd watch them. There was us there, the migrants. The exiles. We'd meet of a day and watch the cricket. That's the great English sport, that all dem countries plays better nowadays? Them was some days, fella. I've been back here years now.

Let me sing yez a song. I'll sing a song. Shake hands. What's your name again? Vincent? Richard. Richard. Shake hands. Let me sing you a song. A song for exiles, and, and, the shovel swinging sixties.
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  • Edit: "I couldn't get work and went hard."
  • Lukin639Lukin639 Posts: 72
    Very interesting read indeed.:)
    I was right there with them for a minute. Pardon my ignorance but is this original or is it taken from something?
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  • I wrote it about half an hour ago. Thanks. :)
  • Lukin639Lukin639 Posts: 72
    Smokes, Burgers and Whiskey or

    Death of a Drunken Farmer
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  • Lukin639Lukin639 Posts: 72
    Lukin639 wrote:
    Smokes, Burgers and Whiskey or

    Death of a Drunken Farmer

    Sorry wrong thread!
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  • Haha. I don't think there were burgers here. I think it's a liquid diet for our protagonist back-at-home-in-the-country all the way, without a burger bar for fifty miles. :) But yes, I think there's a living death described here.

    Thanks!
  • Wrong thread or not, I think this fella would share a bar with Kwijibo's character!
  • Lukin639Lukin639 Posts: 72
    Wrong thread or not, I think this fella would share a bar with Kwijibo's character!

    No doubt about that. :)
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    that was a good read....Fins, have you read 'The Fatal Shore' by Robert Hughes.....it's very good.....about the first convicts (a lot of Irish)......
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • burtschipsburtschips Posts: 734
    That's great..... economic life storey.
    Salut baloo
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Very nice finns...I have a reply...:)
    allison
    Tell me if you like it..using it for a play/movie I'm going to write.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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