Deep Soft Day (a birthday poem)

FinsburyParkCarrots
FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
edited March 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Deep soft day,
day of hedgerow heather dances,
day of cool clear crystal streams,
be the day my lover's heart receives the sun
and be the day her sapphire eyes
become new blue,
new oceans, old mysteries revealed.

Deep soft day,
day of sunning opening tumbling fields,
day of greening budding chestnut,
be the day my lover's lips receive the kiss
and be the day her eyes
behold desire
as a lens deciphering a birthing star.

Deep soft day, bless my love.
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  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,389
    Beautiful poem. Happy Birthday to the wink-ed at person!
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  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    And just so you know...my birthday is April 16th. :)
    Good one finns...endearing.:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

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    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • dyaogirl
    dyaogirl Posts: 138
    To feel love with such joy and gratitude..

    Pearl buds blossom in birth
    springphonic celebration
    love, perpetual renews itself
    in each cherished moment
    with every treasured breath.

    You are the blessing my love. ;)
    '..... Ah! A perfect illustration of the poststructuralist paradox. Does the signifier "Merlot" correspond with the 'truth' of the bottle I polished off last night, or do we hold in our thoughts a different "signified" of bottle-of-Merlot-ness? Perhaps we're dreaming of the same bottle!" -FinsburyParkCarrots

  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Meeeeee Joooooooolieeeeeeeee!!!!!! :)
  • olderman
    olderman Posts: 1,765
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    Meeeeee Joooooooolieeeeeeeee!!!!!! :)

    It's a beautiful poem Fins.. I like the alliteration.. Happy Birthday JOOOOLIEEE!!
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • burtschips
    burtschips Posts: 734
    really, really, very, very beautiful.
    Salut baloo
  • Stinkfoot
    Stinkfoot Posts: 546
    You never fail to astound me F.P.C........Beautiful.
    "I get into a state of consciousness that I can't explain. It is about feeling and not thinking. I get positive chills and insight into things that I can't get to any other way. It is Healing of the Soul." - Mike McCready
  • coleen
    coleen Posts: 938
    so luverly sir fins :D

    happiest of happy birthdays to you miss jewel-ie :D

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