My new song

FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
This one's very personal to me. Hence the simple words. I'll record a demo for you soon.





You were born
Into the sundown of my heart
But you came to me knowing a song.
Where you sang
I knew a new light, my new start
Your love brought me on into the sun.

When you sang
Beautiful light rose again from the land.
When you sang
Beautiful light rose again in my hand.

---

When you left
I thought the sun broke in the sky
But you sang in me, never more clear:
“We are Love,
And we are one light, we’ll not die.
Our time is so long and so near.

‘We will rise,
Beautiful light in new dawn after dawn.
We will rise,
Beautiful light past the end of the sun.”

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Oh I pray
Please don’t mock me people, now
Don’t laugh at me if I cry.
But a little bird
loved me, and I know
He’ll come for me when I die.
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Comments

  • brain of cbrain of c Posts: 5,213
    great.


    can i please hear it, as well?
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    alright then
    thanks richard
    waiting for the audio!
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • Sounds as if he's still singing (a sweetie-tweetie) in your heart, Fins. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • sous great fins
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    f'in great....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • sous great fins

    hmmm typo - misses the edit option for a moment - then clarifies - sounds great fins!
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    My four track is having fits and spits right now. Even if I have to use a wobbly old tape recorder I'll put it up soon. Thanks. :)
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    That's really nice, Fins.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
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