Exercise: Fictionalizing history

FinsburyParkCarrots
FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Please read this:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Irish_Potato_Famine_%281845-1849%29

Research as much as you like on the topic, and please write a piece of prose, poetry or drama set historically at the time of the famine. You could write from any perspective: A starving Irish countryman, woman or child on the land; an emigrant preparing to flee to America; or an English politician or statesman. This exercise is a test of how you take historical data and shape it imaginatively.
Post edited by Unknown User on
«1

Comments

  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    It's a challenging exercise, but does anyone want to give it a try? :)
  • olderman
    olderman Posts: 1,765
    It's a challenging exercise, but does anyone want to give it a try? :)

    it is challenging, especially for an american in kansas.. if i am allowed to interject personal observations of poverty (i did not live in poverty, however, i did observe poverty) from my youth, i will do the research and compose a poem..

    fins is one tough professor!! :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    olderman wrote:
    it is challenging, especially for an american in kansas.. if i am allowed to interject personal observations of poverty (i did not live in poverty, however, i did observe poverty) from my youth, i will do the research and compose a poem..

    fins is one tough professor!! :)

    Well, you could write from the perspective of an Irish immigrant arrived in Kansas City during the famine!
  • ..or you could imagine a german-shepherd born into an irish sustenance without adequate landscape or shelter, and suffered to live on the bread-scraps and mouse-catchings of the family-days; but of course that would be non-sensical and anti-historical, as SirEnglishRabbit, i mean FinsburyParkCarrots, has so readily requested.

    on a side note, i had some RedBreast Irish Whiskey today in Toronto, and it was spicy-scrum-didily-umptious.. [in combo with the bloody-mary i had for breakfast on the boat-over and the Molson Red i had with lunch afterwards;)]

    sorry, sometimes i just can't help myself.. AND I"M STILL HOPING NEIL COMES OUT TO PLAY THE TORONTO SHOW!!!!!!!


    There is a town in north Ontario,
    With dream comfort memory to spare,
    And in my mind
    I still need a place to go,
    All my changes were there.

    Blue, blue windows behind the stars,
    Yellow moon on the rise,
    Big birds flying across the sky,
    Throwing shadows on our eyes.
    Leave us

    Helpless, helpless, helpless
    Baby can you hear me now?
    The chains are locked
    and tied across the door,
    Baby, sing with me somehow.

    Blue, blue windows behind the stars,
    Yellow moon on the rise,
    Big birds flying across the sky,
    Throwing shadows on our eyes.
    Leave us

    Helpless, helpless, helpless.
    i'm a thief... and a liar...

    see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
  • No potatoes to eat
    I can't feed my family
    no potatoes to grow
    how did I even survive it, I dont know.
    No potatoes to sell
    gotta make a living doing something else
    no potatoes for half a decade
    think how much vodka that could have made.
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
  • olderman
    olderman Posts: 1,765
    Well, you could write from the perspective of an Irish immigrant arrived in Kansas City during the famine!

    Tom Pendergast was the son of Irish immigrants and he ran Kansas City's political machine well into the 20th Century. His influence on the U.S.A. was subsequently felt when Harry Truman became President. Truman was a cog in the Pendergast political machine which controlled K.C. during his time. Starving Irish immigrants in KC due to the famine? I'll check it out.
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    SirEnglishRabbit,

    I'm Irish. Funnily enough.
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    hehehehehehe......that's funny Fins.......

    I'm Irish.....funnily enough.......

    said with just the right amount of British sarcasm

    (ps.....if I have time, I'll do this one.....no pormises)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • I'm Irish. Funnily enough.

    nice.
    .....
    change begins with discontent.
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Does anyone want to have a go at this, though?
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    Yes, Fins.....I do......I might take a gander when you've gone off......I have pretty much a free day 2moro......I think I might try it......although you know I'm not the Prose Queen.......
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Last bump for now.
  • burtschips
    burtschips Posts: 734
    nothing written but maybe an idea. I would concentrate on the repossesions/ tennant problems. A tenant a landlord and a twist. Could there be a play on the economic reasons for the spate of repos in the 90s......
    Salut baloo
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    I'm bumping this - I intended to do it last night, but I got side-tracked.....I spent the whole evening in the company of a charming man in the gaelic club, and downed countless guinnesses......and didn't get back til midnight, so I might have a crack at it tonight.....instead.....be patient Fins......:) what I'm going to do, is write something by one of the people in charge in the British government......completely stolen from the book I'm reading at the moment.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • No potatoes to eat
    I can't feed my family
    no potatoes to grow
    how did I even survive it, I dont know.
    No potatoes to sell
    gotta make a living doing something else
    no potatoes for half a decade
    think how much vodka that could have made.

    read that again today, makes me laugh
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Vodka? Wrong country.
  • I believe vodka can be made from potatoes. Can it not?
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I believe vodka can be made from potatoes. Can it not?

    So can projectile missiles. :cool: In Ireland in 1845-50 I think you'll find whiskey in its variant forms was the drink being made from spuds. This exercise is about researching the historical info and turning it into art. ;)
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    tchaliz wrote:
    I was nothing. Born in a waste land, child from a lesser kind. That boat took me down south for 3 long weeks. Everyday the air got warmer, and the sun could burn and tan my skin a bit more. Every night I saw the sky above change, filled with new stars I had never seen, until none of those I knew was left. Covered in red dust and sweat we were packed in pick ups at arrival and driven to the parcels of land allocated by the governement. As many others i knew nothing about cultivating land...No landlords, no farms, no church, no school, no law, no nothing but us, here and now. The "promised" land looked very much like a no man's land. But it was not. And since we were children of a lesser god, I was not surprised to see our blood flow after some years. Our blood was cheap, we were colonizers. An ugly word by today's standarts...victims with blood stained hands.

    - hem...sorry Fins, it's not about Ireland but aren't all emigrants from the same land?

    It's beautiful. Thankyou. :)
  • burtschips
    burtschips Posts: 734
    So can projectile missiles. :cool: In Ireland in 1845-50 I think you'll find whiskey in its variant forms was the drink being made from spuds. This exercise is about researching the historical info and turning it into art. ;)

    I thought poteen or pocheen was the potatoe drink, 100% proof rocket fuel. Ireland did distill the first whiskey though, bushmills, I think somewhere near giants causeway in antrim. I visited the distillery, was first used by warriors to give them courage. apparently.
    Salut baloo