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FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I smashed me fookin' ead
But still I am not dead
So watch out feckin' foes,
I'm standin' on me toes
and burstin' into song
a landed-right King Kong
no planing rock could finish.
Here, can I plug Crinnish?

http://www.myspace.com/crinnish

;)
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  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    I smashed me fookin' ead
    But still I am not dead
    So watch out feckin' foes,
    I'm standin' on me toes
    and burstin' into song
    a landed-right King Kong
    no planing rock could finish.
    Here, can I plug Crinnish?

    http://www.myspace.com/crinnish

    ;)

    aye, ye may plug crinnish,
    from here to somewhere finnish,
    here's watchin' ol' king kong,
    meaner than a junk yard dog,
    for now he's still got toes,
    feels water as it flows
    through a ditch, tis' said,
    where fins once boomped 'is 'ead :D
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    hey!

    i tried to add you to my friend's list, but it asked me all these f'n questions i could'nt anwer

    find me, k?



    ciaociao
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    If I can remember how to sign in, myself! So far only my nephew, sevensins and, er, "Tom" the boss have managed the feat!
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    lol... tom's a dork ;):D


    i saw seventysins on there, too (little cutiepie he is)
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Sheesh, even your bodily functions are poetic! :p;)

    Oh well, guess myspace is called MYspace for a reason---I canna get in there!!!! :D But that's just 'cause my work thinks it's evil....."Your request for page http://www.myspace.com/crinnish has been denied.-The requested web page is categorized as Chat." DAMN! :(

    It sounds as if you're doing better, Fins. I'm so glad! :) *he gets knocked down but he gets up again and you're never gonna keep him down...* :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    ya buy chance k'all newfndlan 'ome?
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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