A new song lyric

FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
edited January 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
"Wear a Medal Like Montaigne"

Here’s a practicing semiotician,
armed with spectacular vision
He can judge how a man’s been defeated
by the way that his trousers are pleated
He can tell if you’ve ever sought better in life
by the way that you butter your bread with your knife
But his face won’t disclose what he feels
when the poorest wretch prays as she kneels,
and won’t steal, though there’s sores on her heels:
What price are these signs, free of earthly designs?

Here’s a master of myth and of culture,
a thinker of world-shaping stature
He can judge how our life-weave is woven
from words other ages have given
He will claim, if you’ve ever proclaimed an idea
that’s your own, that you’re grasping and not even near
But his face won’t disclose what he feels
at the sight of a beggar in wheels
playing sounds, far from polkas and reels:
What rhythms are these, as old/new as the seas?

Wear a sign ‘round your neck like Montaigne,
And aim to make light of your brain
For a mind that is measured in stones
Won’t do much for your bones,
For a mind that is measured in stones
Won’t do much for your bones.

Here’s the ultimate rung on the ladder,
and the finest port goes through his bladder
He can lecture on playing with language,
like a starving man bites on a sandwich
He will say that there’s nothing outside of the text;
It’s been done, it’s all gone, no inventions come next
But his face won’t disclose what he feels
at the thought all his letters and seals
mean as much as a farmyard of squeals:
The words can all change, but life stays beyond range …


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The whole thing came together quickly, with chords. I can't wait to road test it, especially the "language"/"sandwich" rhyme. :D
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Comments

  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    I'd like to hear it! :)
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    It's in G, and there are mainly major chords, really. I'm writing another song right now in E, which flips from major to minor all the time. It's good fun! :)
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    It's in G, and there are mainly major chords, really. I'm writing another song right now in E, which flips from major to minor all the time. It's good fun! :)

    :)
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  • dyaogirldyaogirl Posts: 138
    justam wrote:
    I'd like to hear it! :)

    I've heard it!!!!!! and it's fanstastic!!!
    '..... Ah! A perfect illustration of the poststructuralist paradox. Does the signifier "Merlot" correspond with the 'truth' of the bottle I polished off last night, or do we hold in our thoughts a different "signified" of bottle-of-Merlot-ness? Perhaps we're dreaming of the same bottle!" -FinsburyParkCarrots

  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I'm doing a four track demo right now. I'll try to connect my machine up to my pc, then.
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Okay, I'm going into the studio with it next week, but for now, I put a super-rough home demo up on my myspace page. Hope you appreciate the demo for what it is! :)
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