My Big Concussion
FinsburyParkCarrots
Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
Second Generation Mayo Man
deconstructs a dam of five stone rocks
out from a Cambridge ditch to free a flow
of shitey water. Rolling up one lump
he loses footing and the rock falls down
bang on his head. A brutal meeting point,
upon the day he found that Sinn Fein kept
a tryst of secrecy with Britain, meant
to share real secrets for Security
while people died on day, on day. Big Bang,
take sides and feel collusion’s death-spark clang
and tell you you were just collateral.
deconstructs a dam of five stone rocks
out from a Cambridge ditch to free a flow
of shitey water. Rolling up one lump
he loses footing and the rock falls down
bang on his head. A brutal meeting point,
upon the day he found that Sinn Fein kept
a tryst of secrecy with Britain, meant
to share real secrets for Security
while people died on day, on day. Big Bang,
take sides and feel collusion’s death-spark clang
and tell you you were just collateral.
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l's 2, 10, 11 & 12 are awesome. especially 2, imo... l2's my favorite
it's surely about some british government stuff...
infathomable hogwash, politics... politicians
greedy cocksuckers, the lot of 'em
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
I've been in bed all day today with the headache from hell.
I have had several concussions...they suck. The effects of one really stuck around for about 8 months (the doctor actually wanted me to take several months off work). I had to go see him on a regular basis about it, and get scanned for several years. But as I mentioned, they were compounded.
I hope you went to the doctor. And I really hope you didn't go to bed as soon as you got home. you should avoid sleep right after a concussion even though you are really tired.
Hope you are okay...
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
I'll be okay.
No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
After you die...you know how to LIVE!
im a second generation mayo woman
but i live in galway not cambridge
great poem, hope your head's ok
P@M
the city
ever been?
whereabouts from mayo are ya (nearly) from
P@M
Around these parts,
you gotta make sure you go to the right doctor.
The wrong one in Anthrax-Hamilton could kill you.
Hope you feel better finns,:)
Good read...
allison:)
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
1) Many times.
2) Ballycroy.
Thank you Ali!
I'm okay.
Anyway, back to the poetry, eh?
ready?
How many fingures am I holding up?
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
No, wait.
What was the question again?
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
After you die...you know how to LIVE!
I wish we could see a doctor...but we can't evevn see our hands!
concusions and alcohol.....ahh does life get any better than this?
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key