New song - Olomana

FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
I ended up putting the lyrics to Stabat Mater to an entirely different piece of music, and I'll be putting that up soon. The dub music project I've been working on has been feeling much more upbeat and cheery as it's progressed, and these are the words I've written for it:

Some will say, “Now, sing out, sing low, sing about the deaths of kings.
Show them plunder, ‘til the thunder of gods on high strikes down on mortal things.
Make man’s wars swarm, ‘til the last storm, batters every shield from hill to plain.
Sing of armour, no more in clamour, rusted broken metal in the rain.

‘Show king-defender defeat pretender, and show both men defeated by Queen Time.
Show the proud lance, a severed nonsense, and make the flower prouder through your rhyme.”

I’ll sing of summer, of Olomana, a would-be king who stood near-heaven tall.
(Now you can’t drub this tale of hubris, a quintessential case of rise and fall.)
He stalked Oahu’s king, ‘Ahuapau, sneering at his knights like worthless stones.
The knight Palila cut through this killer, and made a double mountain of his bones.

While man falters, a goddess shelters a little mountain jewel, the ward of bees.
Where man’s forbidden, Pele keeps hidden the Olomana binder of the leis.

Olomana, son of summer, now you rise, to glory prove.
Olomana, son of summer, guard our prize, our bee jewel love.


___


I'll record the vocals tomorrow, and Olomana will be up on the myspace page (all nigh-on sixty tracks of overdubs and seventeen minutes of it!).

I'll say, when Stabat Mater is up, too.
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  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    i'll be checkin' this out ;]
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Mahalo!
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    A practical note, for singing. How the fook do I pronounce ‘Ahuapau properly?


    Anyone?


    Boom?

    :D
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    is not my strong point. I can't wait to hear the tunes, though!

    Um, where is my Bunny song?
    Feels Good Inc.
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Awww, I forgot about that! Er, yuh. You know, after all this overdubbing, nothing sounds nicer than just doing a version in five minutes, of an older song, with the twelve string. I'd do it now, but it's 2am!
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Finsbury, a new song, yay!!! :)
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    justam wrote:
    Finsbury, a new song, yay!!! :)

    Well, they're the new words to the dub song!

    Stabat Mater is now very different.
  • Astral StarAstral Star Posts: 129
    Oooo can't wait to hear this one - some nice Dub on a Sunday afternoon by the beach, oh yeah. How goes it Fins?
    "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to eachother." Mother Theresa
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Goes great!

    http://www.myspace.com/finsburydemos


    First track. I might add some yodelling to the later parts. Haven't decided yet...

    :)

    Oh, and here are the tweaked lyrics.

    Olomana


    Some will say, “Now, sing out, sing low,
    sing out deaths of would-be kings.
    Show their plunder, ‘til the thunder
    of gods on high strikes down all mortal things.
    Make man’s wars swarm, ‘til the last storm
    batters every shield from hill to plain.
    Sing of armour, no more in clamour:
    rusted broken metal in the rain.

    ‘Have king-defender defeat pretender,
    And hint how both will come to dust, in time.
    Show the proud lance, a severed nonsense,
    and make a honey gem of peace, in rhyme.”

    Well, they’ll not drub this tale of hubris,
    this quintessential case of rise and fall.
    I sing of summer’s Olomana,
    a warrior who stood near-heaven tall.
    He stalked the one who ruled Oahu,
    smashing all his knights like worthless stones.
    One knight, Palila, cut through this killer,
    and made a double mountain of his bones.

    Though each man falters, rubble shelters
    one small jewel, who lights the path of bees.
    Where man’s forbidden, shade keeps hidden
    one small bee, the binder of the leis.

    Olomana, son of summer,
    Guard well our jewel bee love.
    Olomana, son of summer,
    Guard her well, and you’ll your glory prove.

    Olomana, son of summer,
    Keep safe our jewel bee love.
    Oh Olomana, son of summer,
    Guard her well, and you’ll your curse remove.
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