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songs written by my daughter

PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
edited June 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Yours

Walking, stalking me, it's hard to breathe get off me. When you fight me you know I like that...want more than that black little hat, won't cover me...as you you crawl in the room merely concious you look at me with those dark decieving eyes.
I knowwhat you want, bet I can't be easy, if he's hungry then he will come to me. My body, your temple...you need me beautifully...I fulfill your immortal cruel intentions...never a white moment when your in that demanding state of yours.
You own me...lost for so long, you found me, faught me, touched , fucked, and bit me. You control me. Please watch over me.

meh
If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
(Angelina Jolie)
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  • PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    "No goodbye"


    Broken down, I can't find anybody to be my rebound, you , yes you, were it. I have so much love and trust with you and that's all I want you to do.
    Say goodbye which leads me to cry. you don't understand, oh you dont...your depth in my body, mind and heart seems to be fading.
    Don't want to lose you, such a terrible thing. there is so much more than physical attraction just hear my heart beat please tell me you'll stay...instead of taking my underground happiness away. I want to talk to you...I want to talk to you today. wish I could turn my thoughts into reality to be honest and free and just to plainly love me. Not hearing your voice is such a restrain it won't work, just makes me have an unbound pain,,,a pain that will always be there, always thought about even if it is forgot. you will be remembered little detailed things bring thoughts about you onto me.
    and you won't say goodbye,,,which leads me to cry. you don't, you don't understand, oh you don't...your depth in my body, mind and heart seems to be.....seems to be.


    meh
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Kiss Me...Kill Me. :(

    Hits hard!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    Perfection

    Plea to free run and hide...only to abide...tears only dry baby, tears only dry...in time of death lonely sleep follows...thinking of someone else...only thinking of no one or him...and then it follows...dreams of freedom , freedom dreams...only dream one inside of three days...turning heads with more room, rooms fill, bodies pile to bodies of a new, a new creation...one improved, a product of sales or stupidity, market of perfection...banished to an island of those rejected. Life is planned with no questions...urged subside pain...feel just as bad..blossom into the sun with wire rays, open sensitive eyes to burn..stare into a creator of shame, of pain, of hope, of loss, word of the day:TRY...try for each till death, ended road comes very close. See the turn but blind spots prevail..shattered mirrors focus all angels...into the mirrors fall the reflection of lies...deep of one dimension. restricted fourth bound in three...collapse of wordly affects us all...folding origami birds...who fly with effortless ease...reshape to shape bodies of clay into perfection.


    meh
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    You's one rockin' parent, PJfaninmaine! :) Kudos!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    why thank you B.E. my motto? Be honest with your children, always be upfront, and believe it or not, they return the favor. I am a very open minded individual, and for that, my kids tell me everything. Fortunately, they are very good kids, no drinking, no drugs etc.......Thank God.
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    :D


    lucky and unlucky at the same time
    seeing these things must hurt somewhere
    but better is the evil known, eh?


    thank you for sharing this
    It's all yellow.


  • PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    Well said Yellow. Thank you













    She holds the hand that holds her down, she will rise above!
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :D

    Herdewadeheydewadehidewada!!!!!! :p

    That's how I'd say it and you know what I'm talkin' 'bout, little momma!!!

    How is you?

    How is your kiddies?

    How is Maine? Any strange happenings like in those amazing Stephen King novels I do so love to read? :p
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!! hummmmmina blabala buddawa! OMG I think Im fuckin retarded! haha.

    Im doing great thanks, and all the kiddies are too. summer almost here!!!!!!!!!!!! yay! Been fuckin rainy and miserable lately up here in the Pine Tree State! thanks for replying especially at this post,, havent read those words written by my daughter in a while, what a talented child i have. I havent written a dam thing lately, but i have the makings of a good one, just have to figure out how to put it into words. Trust me you will be hearing from me soon,

    love ya babes
    mwaaa!
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Not retarded!!! You are wonderful!!! :) A humina, humina, oh yeah!

    Now, is it any wonder that your daughter is so talented! I'm not surprised! With her Mom supporting her and encouraging her and all! No, I'm not one bit surprised! :)

    My eyes shall be waiting to be graced by your lovely lines, dear lady! HOORAY!!!

    Take good care and love to you too!!! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    D's BAR


    Lonely Night.
    No noise in a room that knows too much.
    Have to get out, escape.
    Have to head to D's bar.

    Only you, only me. Even though it's wrong, my needs have to be met.

    Make me a drink. My head is reeling. Only when I'm drunk, the animal comes out.

    We give in to the feelings that stir deep inside. Only you can fill the need.

    You can act like theres no feelings involved.
    Easy for you.
    Hard for me.
    Knowing I will never step foot again in D's Bar.
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Whoa, girl!!!! Talk about capturing the feeling. :( :( The need for the emotional affection seems to turn to a need for physical affection when it seems that that's all you're going to get anyway.

    Very straight forward and sad and I think you did a wonderful job capturing the feeling of how unfeeling a situation like this can be. Thank you for sharing! :)

    And to lighten it up...


    "Jake - everybody needs somebody to love
    Elwood (in that oh so deeeep voice)- someone to love
    Jake - sweetheart to miss
    Elwood - sweetheart to miss
    Jake - sugar to kiss
    Elwood - sugar to kiss"

    Bow-bow-ooo-ooo-ooo--ooo! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    awwwwww thanks sweetness. I havent written anything in a while, I came up with that in about 15 minutes. once i get a line going It all comes to me.

    Now one last try at the Blues brothers,

    howmana mannnannnaa bla blah blahddaddda. haha I can do this right now hahaha. just love to smile though, so thanks!!!
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • empirical_meansempirical_means Posts: 4
    Your daughter has a gift for words. It's nice to see so much encouragement from parents. My parents did it for me and I'm living my dream.

    Nice job on raising your children.

    Hey, it's 10min past 3pm here in the "crapital" The sun's coming out. Yeah! I can do more landscaping after work.
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    hey there woman! i saw you bump my thread the other day... thanks for checking in :) i saw also that you wrote on this thread... interesting read :)
    It's all yellow.


  • PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    Hi there! Thanks for replying. And your welcome for the bump


    Take Care Yellow good seeing ya
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    bumping
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Where's all that good schtuff from your wee one? :)
    And from you for that matter? :mad: :p

    D's Bar, yeah, that one was a goody, babes! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    My daughter has been so busy with field hockey and such she has had no time to write. She also has a beautiful accoustic just waiting for her to put music to her words. I cant wait until she has time, Im sure the outcome will be tremendous.
    As for me well, I am sure after some events happen in my life which will happen soon, I will have tons to write about.
    Always send my best wishes and love for you B.E.
    So glad to see ya
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    Had to bump. Its an old thread but cant help but feel so proud when I read the words my daughter wrote.
    Shes still practicing that accoustic,,, but shes very busy I just hope she sits and writes some more great lyrics soon.
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    Please Don't Wake

    Your asleep
    I hear your respite breath
    Oh please dont wake up
    I don't want you to know what I'm thinking
    I dont want to hurt you
    I dont want to burn you
    I look at you
    and think of him
    You look like an angel when you sleep
    Oh please dont wake up
    Dont,,,please .... dont
    Rest in your restful slumber
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
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