D's Bar Two

PJfaninmainePJfaninmaine Posts: 216
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I wrote a little ditty about a year ago entitled D's Bar,,,,well had to add to it.

D's Bar Two
Never thought I'd see you again,
Your call caught me by surprise.
Good to see you, my lover, my friend.
Let's have some crown-toast the New Year.
Please don't utter a word
Hold me now, close to your heart
Never let me go
Let me drown in your whiskey breath and sweet smelling cologne.
I want to cherish this moment
Make it last
For I know now, this will be the last time I'll be at D's Bar.
If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
(Angelina Jolie)
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  • I remember D's Bar One. Good to see you continuing the theme. :)
  • Thanks Fins,,, I'm trying to get into writing again.
    So glad to see you again!
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • Part One!

    by PJfaninmaine :)

    "D's BAR


    Lonely Night.
    No noise in a room that knows too much.
    Have to get out, escape.
    Have to head to D's bar.

    Only you, only me. Even though it's wrong, my needs have to be met.

    Make me a drink. My head is reeling. Only when I'm drunk, the animal comes out.

    We give in to the feelings that stir deep inside. Only you can fill the need.

    You can act like theres no feelings involved.
    Easy for you.
    Hard for me.

    Knowing I will never step foot again in D's Bar."



    Just thought they should be together. :)

    Now I'm just wondering if it will be the last installment?????

    Luff ya, girly! And you know what??? Rubber biscuits bounce back! :p

    *smoochies* :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • your right they do go together Thank ya so much!!!!

    I wish i had some meatbawwwbawwbawww!
    hehe
    us retards have to stick together. hehe
    smoochies to you too girlfriend!
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • I wrote a little ditty about a year ago entitled D's Bar,,,,well had to add to it.

    D's Bar Two
    Never thought I'd see you again,
    Your call caught me by surprise.
    Good to see you, my lover, my friend.
    Let's have some crown-toast the New Year.
    Please don't utter a word
    Hold me now, close to your heart
    Never let me go
    Let me drown in your whiskey breath and sweet smelling cologne.
    I want to cherish this moment
    Make it last
    For I know now, this will be the last time I'll be at D's Bar.



    i read your poem over & over.i don't know what part grabbed me,but it wouldnt let me go..i am so glad you posted it here
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • Thank you Pearl Jam Necklace I appreiciate that. Well here it is the third installment, who knows maybe another will be added in the future.

    D's Bar Three

    I didn't plan on seeing you
    I didn't expect the phone to ring
    You said; She's leaving
    Leaving for good
    I want to believe you
    But my heart won't let me.
    Come over; Come and have a drink at D's Bar.
    Make it a strong one, it's gonna be a long night.
    You said some very strong words, but you were drunk.
    I'm not sure you meant what you said.
    I love you; You turn me on; Your the best I ever had.
    Do you mean it? No, its the whiskey talking.
    I wish it were true.
    I wish you could comprehend how much in love with you I am.
    At first it was Lust, in a way I wish it was.
    Love is a much stronger emotion.
    Lust; nights of passion. Love means forever.
    Forever an imprint on my heart.
    I am looking forward to seeing you and loving you again at D's Bar.
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
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