Fist..
musiclover
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It is time to make a stand,time to put away the pain,time to lose the fear that comes from within,a rotating axis that surrounds my soul,this is my time to win!No more losses ,no more sorrow just like yesterday's tomorrow.I will raise my hand high and make a fist!
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why not put some line-breaks in your stuff
because if it looks like a poem
and smells like a poem
and sounds like a poem
then its got to be a poem
and remember suggestions are like spankings...take them as you will