Fist..

musiclover
musiclover Posts: 41
edited December 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
It is time to make a stand,time to put away the pain,time to lose the fear that comes from within,a rotating axis that surrounds my soul,this is my time to win!No more losses ,no more sorrow just like yesterday's tomorrow.I will raise my hand high and make a fist!
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  • Goulet
    Goulet Posts: 918
    just a suggestion...
    why not put some line-breaks in your stuff
    because if it looks like a poem
    and smells like a poem
    and sounds like a poem
    then its got to be a poem

    and remember suggestions are like spankings...take them as you will

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